sun x moon??? (Smut May Join

this is a daycare SIR- 《SMUT WARNING》

Suns pov:
like 10 minutes after the incident where I fainted from what moon did, there was chaos basically everywhere. Kids trapped in playsets and stuck on the roofs for Christ's sake, children drowning in the ballpit and moon was duck taped to the floor mats being colored on by five year olds and I was already colored on! Moony was trying wiggle himself out of the tape but that didn't work out. I couldn't even tell what was even happening at this point, so I got up walked and looked at moon "Seriously?! What did you - I can't even- HOW?!" "Not my fault you weren't awake." Moon said in response to my non-English "you know what EVERYBODY PAUSE! STOP RUNNING AROUND STOP EVERYTHING!" I yelled. A few held there breaths "YOU CAN BREATH THOUGH!" I don't even get why that parts nessacary anymore, but everyone did stop. I peeled the tape off of moon and picked up the children coloring on moon as my rays grew from anger which accidentally pulled a kids weave off- "I'm so sorry! Uhmm here's your hair!" I said pulling the wig off my rays. I did put them in the timeout corner that was blocked off by a fence. Moony was already grabbing children out off the ballpit cause of the fact they were drowing-. I tried to get the children untangled from the ropes in the playset which was pretty difficult. Now the hard part wa-.... I grabbed the fly wire and attached it to my back, I then jumped up and grabbed the children on the rooms 'wow, this thing is useful!' I thought as I put the children on the ground. I then unhooked myself from the fly wire.

I skipped around looking for messes and there was a lot! Moon cleaned up half of it. I looked at moon and giggled at all the children squiggles on him, I don't think moon thought it was funny though... "stop laughing at me." Moon said looking back at me, I just laughed harder. 'it's been awhile since I've laughed this hard!' I thought "UGH JUST GOD DAMN STOP!" Moon said once more looking angrier, but I couldn't stop laughing and at this point I fell and was kicking my legs in the air with my eyes closed. When I stopped laughing and I opened my eyes moon was on top of me, he looked cleaner before (sun spent like half an hour laughing btw lol) I checked the time it was 8 pm, the daycare closed half an hour ago and I'm not sure about how I felt with moon hovering over me all I knew was that my rays were shaking rapidly.

Le epic moon pov:
I was on top of sun and like before he was red in the face he was redder than a tomato some would say, but I pefer a baboons buttocks. I just stared at him and a grin appeared on my face. I saw his arms shaking with his rays and then I pinned his arms to the ground. "You're so cute." I said getting closer to him. "M-moony... there's cameras in here!" Sun said, but I didn't care. "Oh my moonlight, who cares? They have eyelids." I said in response to him while moving my hand closer to his thigh. "We might get decommissioned!" "Fine!" I grabbed his back, summoned the fly wire and jumped up to our room and threw him on his bed and jumped on top of him. "Better?" "Y-yes but I've never done this before!" ".... I got here yesterday." He stayed silent. I started to pull down him pants as my grin widened and suns rays started to spin instead of shake. I could tell her was extremely nervous. I took his pants off fully which made suns body shake for a second. I felt his hands try to push against mine. He was trying to cover his face. "Oh sunny.. don't cover your face" I said as I spun my head. He couldn't talk properly, he just kept stuttering. I grabbed both of his hands with one as I took off my pants. I could hear him repeating "oh my stars" quietly. I took his hands apart m when my pants were off. His tentacle was moving fastly. I grabbed his tentacle and lined it up with my entrance and shoved it inside me. "OH MY!" I heard sun yell. I moved my body up and down slamming onto his body. I could hear him make extremely loud moans. I think people could hear us, but that didn't stop me, so I kept slamming onto him making quiet moans.

Vannesas pov:
I heard sun making sounds. I was downstairs checking on the animatronics "can you hear sundrop right now?" I said talking to chica and Roxanne "yeah, we do" they said in sync somehow "I'm going to check on them." I said walking over to the daycare. I'm not sure why the sounds were so loud or why I heard sun swear. But then I stopped walking and thought to myself. 'What of moon- no that's dumb!' I kept walking, but faster, almost speed walking. I opened the doors and threw myself down the slide. 'There probably in there rooms. It's after hours anyways' I thought to myself as I walked towards the fly wire that was left un picked up and jumped up to there room. I saw moon riding sun. I fell off the platform and landed in the ballpit traumatized by what I just saw ".. that's not dumb" I mumbled to myself getting up running as fast as I could towards the exit, opened the door and ran back to chica and Roxanne I started to hug Roxanne tightly still traumatized.

Suns pov:
This new feeling felt so different from anything else. I couldn't control what came out of my mouth. The slamming on my tentacle felt so good I couldn't explain it even if I wanted to "Oh ShiT M-mooNY!" I managed to get out I could tell her was slowly increasing his speed. I couldn't control myself and I felt like something was going to come out. I felt moon slam on me a few more times and my back arched and I came inside of him "Oh my st-ars!" I also managed to get out after. I was exhausted, but Moon had other plans. He picked up my body and pushed me against the wall. At the point I felt like a ragdoll. I felt something enter me and shame in and out of me. I moaned loudly and then I covered my mouth because my hands were free. He kept slamming into me going extremely fast. I felt my rays spin swiftly, I really wanted to arch my back aging cause of how do good it felt but Moon was pressing against my stomach.

Narrorators pov:
Moon kept ramming into sun showing no mercy. About 5 minutes of doing that later moon rammed into sun a few more times then came inside of him, then suns rays came to a stop and shot out by a few inches two times in 1 second. Moon pulled out and changed into some comfier sun couldn't wall properly so when he tried to get some clothing he got up tried to walk and fall "MOONY-"

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