I am walking home from school and he road his bike up to me. We started talking and he stopped and said " you need a ride?"

"Is there a car?" I say looking around

"No on my bike"he said

"Do we even fit on there together?"I say confused if he is being serious

"You should, I do it with my sister dani all the time" he says

"Ok fine" I sigh

I get on the back of his bike and we ride off

"Why are we going into the cemetery?" I say confused

"It's a short cut I found into the neighborhood" he says as we ride into the cemetery. We get stop by these dicks Ice and Jay ugh they are so annoying.

"Hey man who are you ,where are you from?" They say, Max didn't answer and tried to ride away

"Hey guys leave him alone ok" I say

"Ohhhh you already have the hottest chick at school on your bike huh" Jay says

"Yeah I guess I do" Max says and when he does I feel like imma faint.

"Leave the shoes and you can go" Ice says

"Ernie he isn-"

"It's ICE" he says

"Ok Ice he isn't going to give you his shoes" I say

"Then your not leaving" he says and when he does I punch him in the face and Jay tried to grab me and I kick him in his balls

"Go, go hurry" I say getting back on the bike

We get to his house and he takes me up to his room I meet his sister dani and she's cute but a little brat lol. I leave to go home and think about today and all that has happened.

'im so happy I met max' I thought to myself and took a nap. When I woke up I called max and asked him if he is going trick or treating, he says he has to take his sister.

"I thought you weren't into Halloween"

"I'm not, I told you I have to take Dani"

"Well can I go with you guys?"

"Yeah sure if you want"

"Yeah, what are you going to be?"

"Nothing"

"Oh come on Max"

"Fine"

"Good, then I will see you later bye"

"Bye Y/N"

We hang up and I go and get my costume. I was going to be an angel I based my costume off of Shelby from Cinderella Story (pretend that movie came out before Hocus Pocus)

 I was going to be an angel I based my costume off of Shelby from Cinderella Story (pretend that movie came out before Hocus Pocus)

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I felt so pretty I went to Max's house and rang the doorbell his dad answered and he had a socked look on his face

"Your the girl going with Max and Dani" he questioned

"Yes nice to meet you" I say

"Um ok come in" he says "Um Y/N is here" he yells

"Um hi" his mom says

"Hi nice to meet you" I say "Hey guys"

They look at me with there mouths open

"Max you said you would dress up"

"I did"

"Then what are you?"

"A Rapper"

"Oh yeah ok" I say in a sarcastic tone "Dani I love your witch costume"

"Thank you and I love yours to but I could never wear anything like that because I don't have, what do you call them Max? Yabbos?" She says ,I giggle
"Max likes your yabbos, infact he loves them" I laugh and Max spits his drink

We head off and get out the door.

"You look good Y/N"Max says

"Thanks Max" I say smiling and flustered

We go trick or treating and run into Jay and Ice. We tell Dani to go a different way but ugh she has to stand up to them.

"Hey stop stealing candy" she says and we walk up behind her

"Yeah what are you going to about it" Jay says

"I have my brother with me" she says

"OoOoOoOoOo"they all say

"Guys stop"Max says

"Ohhhh Hollywood your the brother" Ice says

"For your information he is a little leaguer" Dani says

"Not anymore Dani" Max says embarrassed

"Ok guys just leave us alone and we will leave you alone" I say

"Oh Y/N we dont want you to leave us alone" Ice says

"Yeah and your ass looks good in the costume" Jay says

I kick them both in the balls and we leave

*Hey guys this chapter is longer hope you like it"

*737 words*

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