My Diamond in the Rough

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Hey, this is the first fantasy romance I ever wrote!  So comment, and vote because I want feedback!

It all started out on a simple day in highschool

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    "Hey, Erika, you zoning out again?" My friend Beige asked me.  She has been there for me for quite some time, ever since we were in second grade.

     "Huh? What? Where am I?" I asked out of shock. "Oh, I must've fallen asleep again...."

     "You're in science, and yes you did,  you dummy!" The one thing I have always hated about her: she's such a critic!  "It's passing time already, so I guess you'll have to copy off my notes." She said in an exastperated tone.  Beige always hated admitting it, but it was the biggest compliment to her was when someone copied off her schoolwork.

     "Ugh, what class is next?" I asked.  Man, I can't even remember a thing.  But I fall asleep often in my classes, but Beige always helps me keep up in school.  Without her I would be failing almost all of my classes.

     "English.  The hardest language to learn if not raised using it."  Man, she always spews out random facts.

     "Ladies, get out of my classroom please."  Mrs. Smith asked politely.

     "Sure, just a second," Beige said as she started pulling me out the door be my arm.

     "Ouch! Not so hard!" I yelled.

     "Hehe, that's what she said!"  My perverted friend Tyler said as I walked out into the hall. 

     "Man, would you ever stop being a PERVERT!?!?" Beige yelled at him.  To be honest I would have backed her up but I was too tired to say much.

     "You know you like it,"  Tyler said as he grabbed her waist and pulled her into a hug.  Her face turned a bright red as she just stood there against him.

     "Get a room," I wispered under my breath.  When will I ever find my right guy like them? I thought to myself.

     "You like it too!" He said as he pulled me into a group hug.  He knew me too well.

      "OH! Crap, we only have a little more passing time left! I need to get to my locker!"  I said as I broke away from the group hug.  "Gotta go!" I yelled as I walked swiftly down the halls.

      Crap crap crap crap crap!!!!!!! I thought as I ran down the hallways.

      "Looks like someone's late to class," I heard someone say.

      Screw off! I wanted to yell at him.

      "Hey! Don't be so mean!" I heard him say.

      I stopped in my tracks.  I turned to look around, but the halls were nearly empty, and people who were still around were either focusing on making out or trying to stuff their lockers and find their papers.

        Who-- who are you? I thought to myself.

         "Oh, you don't know?" I heard the voice say as I was turning around everywhere searching to find where the voice came from.  "Haha, well that's to be expected I guess," he said as he laughed.

         Please, tell me who you are? Or am I just going insane? I asked the voice.

         "My dear, I am positive you have not gone mad," he said.

          Please, just--just Leave me alone!!! I yelled at the voice.

          "As... you.......wish.........." the voice said as it faded away.

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⏰ Last updated: Apr 24, 2011 ⏰

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