Original note:
So
For - mintfur-'s contest
I am sorry for writing this :'D
In answer for my form there is "accepted" but I'm not on the list :> let's see
and now let's get an hour of time, because reading will take it XD
i did this on time, almost failed.
but there is it.
//14/03/2022//I'll make the cover tomorrow or soon ;'D
Maybe there'll be other translated one-shots in this book so idk yet if I should make a new cover or just new subtitles on old oneOkaaay-
It's currently 2023, January first for me(Actually I'm still in 2020 XD)
And here is the story. If you want to help me with correcting the text, pv :>>
I'm not sure if the title is right because literal translation is Deadstar's legend
But The Legend Of Deadstar sounds good even if its not correct XD
The problems you may see here:
- weird names (Little Mustache), weird names of things (for example, leader wont be leader, medicine cat will be something else, apprentice will be student etc), i tried to fix some of them but anyways
- weird tenses (in Polish there is basically three tenses: past, present and future, we don't have thing like present perfect continuous and I'm happy about it ;'D
- weird pronouns (?)
For example "She is", "He is" and "It is" in Polish may be translated as "Jest" because we tend to skip "he, she, it" (verbs mostly have different form but it depends of tense, for example present "eat" would be: jeść = eat, [ja] jem = I eat, [ty] jesz = You eat, [on/ona/ono] je = he/she/it eats etc.
- changing names
-other weird things.If you had a problem with name and you don't know whose it is, here's the list of cats in the book:
TwillightClan
Graydawn/Greydawn/Deadleg/Deadstar (main hero, protagonist)
Swallowfeather/Swallowstar (Protagonists sister)
Darkflower (TwillightClan's medicine cat)
Stonestar, Blueberrybush, Sparklingstripe, Littlewhisker
Gooseberrykit, Blueberrykit if I remember right ;'DDawnClan (the name might change in story, idk XD, it should be "Klan BRZASKU" while Graydawn's name is "Szary ŚWIT" but google changed everything to dawn and i guess its similar meaning
Twinklingstar
Herbalwhisper (medicine)
Springtail (other things similar to spring, so Rivertail, watertail, idk, may happen)Ask if you need to understand anything :DD
Good night everyone :>It was dawn. The sun was slowly rising over the Twillightclan's grounds, spilling layers of pink and peach across the sky and pushing away the heavy night clouds. A light breeze caressed the leaves of the vines, which swayed on the beds entwined with them to the rhythm of the gusts. They rustled softly, inaudibly, stroking their ears and falling asleep.
Graydawn stretched and yawned as she settled into the bed, which had grown oddly uncomfortable overnight. Spreading her claws, she grabbed a thorn hidden among the moss and threw it away from her. It was perfect now. Funny how right now, looking outside, she was literally seeing her own name. She intended to settle down there again and fall asleep, but she was interrupted by the soft meow of her sister lying next to her.
"Today it's our turn to patrol."
The cat suppressed a disappointed and regretful sigh. With Swallowfeather she could never sleep any more! She scrambled out of her cozy, as warm as ever bed to stand next to the black and white warrior, who was ready as usual."Ouch!", she moaned suddenly, jerking her fluffy gray paw up and looking at it with distaste. A thorn pierced her, the same one she had just thrown away. Mouse dung! He seemed to be sitting deep. Actually... that would be a good excuse for a patrol!
"Do not even think about it!" Swallowfeather snarled sharply, interrupting Graydawn's examination. "We're going, even if a pack of foxes comes at you and rips out all your fur!"
YOU ARE READING
The Legend Of Deadstar|| MY OTHER BOOK GOOGLETRANSLATED FROM POLISH! Cover soon
FanficHellooo- so I have actually a lot of English followers and I decided I want them to know one of my stories, which is, as you can see - Deadstar's legend. I don't know advanced English, and I don't have the time to write that 10K words one more time...