She Doesn't Want You

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A/N~ hey guys ! This story has 4722 reads ! That's crazy ! I never thought my story would get this popular and I didn't even think it was that good haha. But it means a lot to me if you just read this and I would love to her you opinions so comment, comment, comment :) I'm setting a goal to 5000 reads so go tell you friends ! I want to send a huge shout out to my best friend

Kas2355 ! Her story's are amazing. The one she is working on now is ' Reunion ' it's the sequel to her story 'You Were Warned ' the story line is incredible ! So go read ! Go now ! :) remember to comment ! Please ? I love you all ! Kisses xx

- Louis's POV -

A bunch of fireman came and went into the house to look for Sabrina.

We all waited anxiously for Sabrina to just come out and be okay.

They came out about ten minutes later and one of them was carrying her bridal style.

She was all covered in black soot and she looked so helpless.

" Sabrina !" Everyone shouted

" Get the Gurney !" The fireman shouted.

They quickly laid her down and were rushing to the ambulance. We were running with them.

" Louis.." Sabrina said. Her voice didn't even sound like her. It sounded horse and deep like she was sick.

" Honey, stop talking your gonna be alright " the fireman said

" Kassie.." She said

Then after awhile she said Niall's name and passed out.

" She doesn't have a pulse " another fireman yelled.

" No !" I screamed

We ran all the way to the ambulance and they shut the doors.

" Someone get the car we have to go to the hospital " I said crying even more.

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We got to the hospital and they wouldn't let us in. I was so worried. She can't be dead. She just can't be. I couldn't live with out her.

" Louis ?" Kassie said still crying. I looked at her.

" Why did you tell people you were single ? It really hurt Sabrina " she said

" To be honest , I was having second thoughts " I said.

" About what ?"

" I still love Eleanor. A lot and I felt bad to date Sabrina if I still had feelings for someone else "

" So do you even like her ?"

" Yes. Yes I do. A lot "

" What's stopping you ?"

" The hate maybe ?"

" Sabrina is way to strong for that. She doesn't care what other people think of her. "

" I don't know "

" Don't know about what ?"

" I don't know how I feel about her " I said

" Well how does she make you feel ?"

" Whenever I see her , it's like we're they only two people on the planet until someone breaks me from my thoughts"

" Keep going "

" When she touches me , I just feel like I could fall into a million pieces. And when we kiss it feels like the Fourth of July on the moon "

" Wow , she's sound special " Kassie said laying back snuggling into Niall's chest.

That's when I realized it. The only thing that's keeping me from loving Sabrina is me. It was me this whole time and I was angry at myself for not caring enough about someone who cared about me.

" As soon as she wakes up I'm telling her that I lover her " I said. Everyone smiled but Harry

" What ?" He said

" As soon-"

" No , don't say it again. You don't love her." He said

" Excuse me ?"

" You still love Eleanor and you know it "

" Well all you want from her is to get in her pants !"

" That's not true !"

" Since when have you had feeling for her ?" I asked

" Since day one ! I didn't tell anyone because I didn't know if she would like me or not."

" Since when have you cared about that ?"

" I don't know ! I like her and that's why I kissed her " he said and my cracked a little bit when he reminded me of that.

" Why would you do that when you know I liked her ?" I replied

" You said you were single ! Everyone thought you were going to break up with her that's what everyone thought , it wasn't just me. It was her too, the guys , even Kassie. Everyone thought you were single because you said it "

" Well that was a mistake and I realized that now "

" Yeah well I think it's too late for that "

" She doesn't want you " I said

" You don't know what she wants. But indent to find out. "

" Back when she came out of that house that collapsed she said the name of her best friend , her twin brother and the one she loved. She didn't mention your name once. " I said pointing to everyone

" Maybe she did , we weren't with her all the time. She could have said it in the ambulance , you don't know "

" I think I do "

" Guys just stop " Liam said and we both sat down.

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" Hi , I'm doctor Wren " the doctor said approaching us. Everyone said there hellos and he began to Explain.

" Sabrina has a couple broken ribs some serious bruises and scratches. " he said

" Okay that's by the serious right ?" Kassie said

" You didn't let me finish. She's in a coma and we don't have any idea of when she might wake up. It could be a couple hours or a couple weeks. "

" Oh god " I said

"And - " I cut him off

" And ?"

" A part of the house fell on her throat and she won't be able to talk when she wakes up" he said

" When will she be able to talk ?" Harry asked and I rolled my eyes

" Wouldn't you like to know " I said and the doctor continued

" We will have more details on that when she wakes up " the doctor replied.

"Can we at least see her ?" Niall asked

" Of course come with me." The doctor said.

We walked down the hallway and I saw all the sick patients and got even sadder. I want to talk to Sabrina now . I have to tell her how I feel.

" Here's her room " the doctor said pointing and leaving.

We all walked it and it was complete silence. She was clean but beaten up. Her eye was a little black and she had a band aid over her left eye. She looked so beautiful and helpless at the same time . I started to cry even more.

I just want her laughing and smiling again. I want her in my arms and I want to hold her hand and kiss her and just treat her like she's my girlfriend.

I miss her telling jokes an making us all laugh. I miss the way her eyes sparkled. I miss her beautiful green/ blue eyes so much. I want to see them so bad.

" I guess now " Niall sniffed " we just wait " he said taking a seat.

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