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➺ { Helena } kangmisoo222

Client: kangmisoo222

Rater: helixgro

Username 7/10

The username is not very original as there is already someone with the user "kangmisoo" or similar. The numbers at the end look out of place to me, so I suggest removing the numbers and doing something like "-kangmisoo-" or "_kangmisoo_" etc. I do like the fact that it is distinguishable and easily recognisable as yours, however.

Display name 7/10

It says your name, which instantly introduces you as a person so the viewer knows how to refer to you. It also eliminates the awkward question of "what's your name?" I've deducted points because I think it could be better without the winking face since it makes the name off center. Also, it doesn't match with your bio which is full of emojis and icons, so I suggest putting some sort of quirk on either side to make sure it looks aesthetic and is still in the center. Like this: ☾✦Rosogolla✦☽

Theme 20/20

I like your theme because it matches ideally with the glaucous aesthetic you were going for. The colour scheme is spot on and your profile picture and background match perfectly. They're very well put together and have a pleasant look.

Bio 12/20

I like your bio because it is creative and helps the viewer get to know you. It includes some quotes and excerpts that represent your personality, and has a creative use of fonts. Something that I would look out for, however, is the overuse of emojis and symbols. I also deducted points because of the cringe nature of "hates to hurt others" and "hates to feel hurt because of somebody else". I believe that this was unnecessary and unneeded to include so personal. I recommend changing this to something generic like nouns or verbs. Furthermore, the bio is inconsistent with the rest of the text on the profile and doesn't match at all. Standalone it's good, but paired it isn't.

Location 5/5

The location is creative and unique, and contributes well to the soft, dreamlike motif across your profile. The emojis are also well put together and look good with the rest of your bio and location.

Link 5/5

It was a good idea to link one of your socials as it helps give you more exposure. Looking at the follower count on your YouTube compared to your Wattpad there is a clear difference, so I encourage you to advertise your Wattpad more to bring it up.

Reading list 7/10

The reading lists are good because they give a clear description of the types of books that someone can find there. Without even knowing the fandoms, someone can navigate easily. I've deducted points because it doesn't match with the rest of the profile, and doesn't have the "glaucous aesthetic" to it. I suggest either adding some sort of emojis and symbols or making the writing in a creative font so it matches with your bio.

Concept 4/5

The concept of your profile is k-pop/glaucous, and I think those two go really well together. Overall for the most part you captured the essence of "glaucous aesthetic" really well, and personally I really like the theme you went with.

Vibes 9/10

You give me the vibes of a nice person who cares about appearances. This is because you say you hate upsetting others which shows you value emotions, and clearly your profile had effort put into it since you even commissioned others to make the bio and profile picture for you.

Books 2/5

I like the covers of your books and I think they're very well made. I also like the consistent theme that you use with the book titles, which make them easily recognisable as yours. However, looking at only the description of your books I can see there was little effort put into them as there's spelling mistakes and the dialogue is forced. To me, it seems like they require a good editor that can help you.

Total 78/100

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