SWEg

___Lay___

___lay___
I really like your books.

They are fun, upbeat, and nice to read.

The only couple of problems that I have are these.

You don't update very often.

I'll be sitting, waiting at my computer clicking the refresh button and no new stories from you will pop up.

Also, your Pearlnet fanfiction is the amazing.

I really do love it. The only thing is that the stories are a little hard to follow. You also can do so much more than you think you can.

Both of your books can be pushed into huge stories with plots and character devolpment.

You could change what people think Steven Universe is about. You could do so much more.

You can write really well. Just make sure you add a little bit more deatil.

I know that you can do great things, and these stories are something amazing.

So, do something epic with them. And I'm still waiting for that update on The Forgotten Gem.

Please keep writing and never give up.

If you havn't checked out ___lay___
Then read her stories, there worth it.

If you want me to review your stories or have some one you want me to review than just tell me.

As always LOVE YA'LL!!!