Breaking Dawned

Chapter 1

Edward's POV

It was already to late we had to take her to the hospital. She looked dead. She looked human. So weak, so dead. She can't be dead she's a vampire, vampires don't die out of nowhere. She didn't seem to look at all vampire, the one reason we took her to the hospital.

"Son, they said one person can go in there, we thought you would want to go see her." Said Carlisle. "Thanks." I merely mumbled.

I walked to elevator 5 to floor 13 to room 86. //AN// get what I did there 51386? No okay whatever back to story.////

There she was laying there connected to almost everything this god damn hospital has.

Carlisle POV

"Okay guys we can't tell Edward that we know that Bella is no longer one of us. The doctor said she obviously was attacked and was close to death. She's in a coma. We are hoping that

she comes back. But that's all I know because they won't let me work on her case." I quickly said hoping nobody heard me.

"Why don't you tell Edward? Huh? Its not like she's useful in this family. And--" "Rosey that's not nice." Emmett said. "So what your telling me that you care about her too! She's nothing all she's going to do is hurt you, us even Edward!" Rosalie stormed out of the waiting room.

Everyone then looked sad. If Esme could let a tear shed she would.

Edward's POV

My dear Bella you don't know how long I've waited for you. I'd rather die, then stay away from you...

"Excuse me, Sir um I need to give her her medication." Kerry smiled to me then giggled. I remember Kerry from when I was hers last time.

Flash back
I was here at the hospital trying to find Mrs. Cope the nurse, if she had the key to Carlisle office to get some files. "Oh yes but I think Kerry might have them you can go back there and go check if you would like sweetheart." She smiled looking frustrated. "Thanks Mrs. Cope." I smiled back.

Rather be at home with Bella then be here. "Hello Kerry I'm just here for the key to Dr.Carlisle office?" I questioned.
"Absolutely hers you go. Have a nice day Mr. Cullen." She smiled then giggled. She was one of the nurses who haven't checked me out wanting to go out with me.

Flash back over.

I smiled to Kerry. "So by chance do you yet know what is wrong with her? Bella?" "Um yeah didn't the doctor tell Dr. Carlisle?" "I was there he said he will tell his family. Would you like to know what's wrong with her?" She smiled and I bet you know what she did after that. Yep she giggled. It wasn't an annoying giggle she just always giggled... a lot. "Yes please." I answered urgently. "Well you see she was very close to death and she--" I cut her off I could take it. "So she's dead please don't tell me she is please!" I nearly yelled. "Oh no no she's just in a very deep coma."

Did you guys like it was it long enough? OOTD: What do you think will happen next, a family feud or what?