Torment || l.s.

Revise

Hello readers!

I thought long and hard last nigh, literally ending up sleeping around 8am.

I concluded to myself to remake everything from the beginning. Yes, I won't stop writing but I want to make things right.

( Massive thank you to Sophia for texting me how utterly stupid I am and for making me realize why I started writing this in the first place. )

I think rewriting this will be a good idea since I myself as a writer is not happy with the way it's turning out. I really want to finish this book and I wrote this book in the first place with a certain personal reason and I will do justice to myself if I finish it.

The plot will not change. I promise you that but I have certain factors that I'm not really certainly happy on some parts of the book. I want to fix it before I will mess everything up

Factors:

Character Development

I want to make sure that I stick to the certain character properly when it comes to my POVS. I don't like to drag the story with the character's none stable personality. I will change some of them but mostly focusing on improving.

Additional

I will add some characters from the real universe using it as their names to be more close to realism and it will intake more connectivity. I believe it will give spark to the story and it will inhance the plot as well.

As for the plot, I will add some chapters and happenings since I added more characters. I think that would be fair enough as well as deducting unnecessary chapters that makes the story drag.

Realism

As I've mentioned the importance of realism, I think it lacks that certain important factor. Everything is happening way too fast for the characters to handle. I don't want to break my characters. I want them to adopt and develop as we go along towards the end. I've notice that everything is not at all realistic. Don't worry the plot will be the same. I am configuring the character's way of addressing the different situations in the story.

Parts

I will have this book split into parts. No, there will be no second book anymore. I want to make this as straight forward as possible without it being a drag. I don't want to bore my readers as much as make myself sick of writing it.

End

The goal is to have this done by the first week of August. And maybe much much more earlier. I don't want to rush. I want to make this very satisfying as much as possible for you and most importantly me. I want my readers to grasp the concept and learn something from this book. I don't want this as an entertainment purpose only. I want this to hit you, right in the gut and to open your eyes.

I will change everything but not entirely everything. I will improve and make things more better and understandable. At least that's my goal. I hope all of you will still go along with the story cause it will be better. It will be more interesting, I promise you. At least, I will make it interesting for you to read and for me to write.

I also want for each and everyone of you to not be a ghost reader as much as possible. React if you must but in a mature manner. I want to read your comments and feedbacks and I will reply to you if you have any questions!

I am not a professional but I'll put my best feet forward to help.

I will see you again in the first chapter that will be revised by tomorrow.

Questions? Thoughts?
Will you still read it?