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I shake the drink quickly as i pour it down the cup.
"Hear you go, enjoy" I say as i take the tip.
It's been 3 hours and 34 minutes since i've been here.
My shift is over in 20 minutes and 33 seconds.
"Hi can i have a beach ice mojito?" A voice hits me.
"Uh-huh, ID please" I say.
The man goes through his pockets and looks back up at me,
There's sweat on the top of his forehead and the tip of his nose,
He's nervous,
Which means, he's under the age of 18.
"I'm sorry i forgot it at home can you just give me the drink?" He says as he scratches the left side of his neck.
"I'm sorry sir without an ID i cant give you a drink" I say as i give him an apologetic smile.
He huffs and walks away.
I walk inside as i take off my work skirt and put in my clothes, I grab my keys and leave.
I start the car as i drive my way home.
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"Dad?" I yell out.
I put my keys down and my boots off as i walk in,
Slowly entering the living room,
I find my dad on the couch,
One hand on his chest and the other holding a beer.
I take a deep breath as i hold him up.
"Come on" I grunt.
"Rachel" He mumbles.
Tears swell up my eyes as i rest him down on the bed.
Rachel is my mother,
She left when i was 13 after being diagnosed with cancer.
She didn't wanna hurt him so she told him that she's going to be at the hospital.
It's been 6 years and he is still, not over her.
I grab a cup of water from the kitchen and sit down on the table.
I turn on my laptop as i look at the news.
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3:45 AM
A strong knock hits my door.
Again,
And again.
"Jesus hold on!" I yell.
I open the door as i meet a man who looks 40.
"Dad!" I yell.
"what?" My father grunts as he walks down.
The man looks at my father as he pushes me aside making me hit my head.
"Where's my money?!" The man yells.
"I told you i'll pay you later!" Dad yells.
"I want the money now" The man says.
I hold my head as i hear yelling,
I try to walk out but a man holds me and throws me back making me hit the wall again.
I groan in pain as i look at my dad.
"Dad?" I let out.
"You have a daughter Luke?" The man says.
"Please don't bring her into this" Dad says as he looks at me.
"What's your name?" The man asks.
I look at him and try to get up.
"How much does he owe you" I say.
"34 grand." My eyes widen as i look at my dad.
"You bought 34 grand worth of drugs?!" I yell.
My dad pulls out a gun and before i can do anything a loud bang hits my ears.
Everything is blurry as i watch the men shoot and my dad shoot back.
I run outside as i bump into a tree.
I rub my head looking behind me.
A man is following me.
He grabs my wrist twirling me as he pushes me down.
I kick him with my foot but fail.
He grabs me up onto his shoulder as i yell.
He throws me back in the house.
I get up and push him as i run to the kitchen.
I look at the floor.
My dads corpse is there.
Plain.
I grab a knife and point it at him.
"Back!" I yell.
The man laughs as he grabs it from me and stabs my leg.
I scream in pain as i run.
I run out again and i make my way to a house.
I knock,
and knock.
A door opens.
I look behind me but the man seems to be smiling.
A young man opens the door.
"Please! they-" my voice feels faint as my eyes close.
"Hello?" A faint voice calls.
Suddenly,
I feel blackness overwhelming me.
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I open my eyes as i look around me.
Im back in my house.
My leg is bleeding.
I get up from the porch and walk in.
I grab a med kit,
I tie a knot and take the knife out as i groan in pain.
"fuck" I whisper.
A man walks in,
He looks very young.
The first thing i notice are his greyhound eyes. His buzzed hair and the tattoos that cross his arm.
"Your awake" He says.
I get up.
"I'm not here to hurt you" He says.
"Fuck you" I whisper.
He looks at me as he grabs his gun putting it in his back pocket.
"where's my dad" I say.
"dead, in a river." The man says.
Oh god.
I try to run but he grabs me as i yell.
"for fucks sake" he says as a strong injection hits my shoulder.
Slowly i feel faint.
"damn it not again" I mumble.
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I open my eyes and the first thing i see is a fish tank.
My eyes move around as i notice men arguing.
"Stupid! what are we gonna do now?" A man whispers.
He is doing a terrible job at hiding his voice.
"We kill her" A strong voice echoes in my ears.
I look to my left and find the same man in-front of me.
He bends to his knees and looks at me.
Looking at every detail there is to see.
"What's your name?" The man asks.
I look at the man.
I maintain eye contact until he breaks it and get up.
"I'd like everyone to leave. Xavier wait here." He commands.
This dude practically barks at them and they listen.
He looks back down at me,
He bends his knees again.
"what's your name?" He asks again.
He closes his eyes breathing in slowly.
"I'd rather kill you with a name" He says.
"Your not gonna kill me" I let out.
His eyes open as he looks at me.
"and whys that?" He asks
I smirk a little knowing he knows.
"Because your not stupid" I say.
"You haven't met me then" He says.
He pulls out a knife, slowly getting closer.
I try to move back but i'm on the edge already.
The cold metal goes on my throat.
Walking down my chest,
To my stomach.
"What's your name?" He asks gently.
I take a moment.
lie.
"Sophie" I say.
"Sophie.." He's waiting for a continue.
"Sophie brown" I say
He gets up and tells something to the guard.
He opens the door but before he leaves i yell.
"Wait!" He turns back looking at me.
"Whats your name?" I say
He looks at me.
He walks out.
I lay my head on the wall.
My father died.
They killed him.
But they had a right to.

hi! i need you opinions on the first chapter to see if i should continue or not❤️