One Hot Trip (will be some steamy sence)

One Hot Trip

hey all this is my first attempt at posting on line so bare with me an would love to hear any ideas an suggestion u think might work in the book. one other thing if ya can think of a better title then send em in. the intro in long cos i want u all to get to know the ppl in there before the story heats up an it will i promise so here goes nothing xxxxx

Intro

It was midday before Brooke lake-land woke from her extra long lie in an the sun was blazing into her room. she was looking forward to her birthday camping trip away where she and her friends had planned to go camping a few hours drive from there home town to celebrate Brooke's 20th birthday. she couldn't wait her an her 2 beast friends had been planning for weeks about where exactly to go, what to do when they got there an who to take, that one had taken the longest to sort out nearly two weeks in fact, finally they decided it would be Brooke, Sasha, Nikita ( Kiki), Max, Jacob and Logan and after asking the boys they realised what a great idea it was because the girls all had a crush on one or other of the boys although Brooke thought she was the furthest thing from Logan's mind in terms of a love interest.

Logan

Logan who lived next door to Brooke for the last ten years was pretty shocked at the invite he got for Brooke camping trip but he decided to say yes because he thought he cud use the time to figure what happened between him an Brooke and why they had barely spoke to each other in nearly four years, since he had blossomed into a hot and very handsome bloke he was always kinda good looking but over that summer he had changed dramatically he has toned up bulked out alot, cut what was then his shoulder length brown hair to a funky styled short back and side with some highlights thrown in an then shook up he wardrobe with some new clothes to go with his new smoking body.

When he got back after that summer he had allot to get use to, the big change was the girls they seem to come out of the woodwork he had never felt so wanted in his life and was loving it, the other change was the way Brooke was treating him, he didn't get why she pulled away from him in the end there once growing friendship was reduced to polite conversations as they were coming to and from there houses and a few drunken talks at a few party's they had both been invited to.

He wasn't the only one invited on Brooke's trip his two best mates Jacob an Max were too, The three boys were as close as three people cud be they done everything together from the same sports to having the same likes an dislikes in food music and movies the only thing the boys didn't have the same tastes in were girls. People use to joke and tease them about there "bromance " but after awhile the boys got use to it an even joked that if they weren't so obsessed with girls they would be in a three way relationship.

Nikita

Nikita who was the youngest of the girls at 18 an who had a crush on Max for the last few months was also looking forward to the trip away as she thought that it would be the perfect time to let Max know how she felt about him.

What she wasn't looking forward to how ever was spending the trip in the company of Chloe, the two for some reason didn't get along all that much but had always put their differences aside for Brooke and their love for her.

Chloe

Chloe had been friends with Brooke and also best mates with Jacob. Chloe and Jacob had decided that even though the found each other attractive they wouldn't act on it in fear of spoiling the close and trusting friendship they had built up over the last three years.

Chapter 1

The six friends spent the rest of Thursday either on the phone talking to each other or messaging. Jacob and Chloe had even stayed up till 1am, while on the other hand Brooke was till trying to get more details out of kiki about what was planned for the trip, when that didn't work out she rang round the others but no-one would tell her a thing knowing if they slipped up an told her the surprise that were planned for her kiki would kick their asses. The only clue she managed to get was off Max which was a very cryptic "hope you have a good sense of humor".

New Update

The next morning they all got up at 8.30am and started packing while Brooke was woken by the phone ringing an bleeping non stop with people wishing her happy birthday before too long the door was going to with friends an family bringing gifts an cards. Time flew by an before Brooke could blink it was 2pm an Kiki was calling to pick her up but because of the visitors an all she was only half packed, so Kiki gave her a hand with finishing packing an half hour later she was all packed though Kiki had to sit on the case to finally shut it did the girl really need this much stuff Kiki thought to herself . It was a good thing she helped to cos no sooner had the shut it they heard a beep outside it was Sasha, Logan, Max and Jacob, they quickly packed up the car an headed off with Max following on his motorbike.

On The Road

After they had FINALLY set off and Max had finished showing off on the bike doing tricks along side the car when he could, which didn't impress Kiki a bit her heart was in her mouth the whole time the others didn't help either by cheering him on an she was thankful that after a few hours on the road they pulled into a gas station to refuel the car an them selves.

Kiki pulled Max to one side to tell him to behave on the bike while the others went inside. she hadn't on planned on getting has mad as she was by the time they were alone and had rushed what she said to him, Kiki " why do you have to be such a jerk on that thing, don't you know you could kill yourself if you had lost focus for a second, GOD you go on these little ego trips of yours an just don't think about other peoples feelings do you, ii don't know why i bother caring sometimes. did you know my heart was in my mouth the entire time you were doing your stupid tricks showing off, next time just think about others people before you put your life on the line like that again some people would actually miss you if you killed yourself on that stupid bike but like i said before you just don't care do you" she took a deep breath an just looked at him there was a long silence an before Kiki could say anything Max had pushed her against the wall an was kissing her with so much passion an heat that she felt like she was going to melt right out of the hold he had on her and when she realised what was happening she kissed him back with has much heat an passion her hand slowly running down his sides an over to her surprise a well defined an very hot six pack which was making her pull him closer to her, his hand had snaked round to her peachy behind an he was gripping it pushing their lower body together so she could feel his lust for her, they heard someone calling them an Max slowly pulled away and said they were coming before leaning in an kissing her again this time leaving a trail of scorching hot kisses that went down her neck to her collar bone she couldnt help the moan that left her body which Max inturn liked so much he went down the other side an again a moan left her lips this time moaning his name he felt like he was in heaven when his name left her lips in that husky lust induced moan he was getting harder just thinking about it again, it was only because he heard the gang calling again he pulled away leaving a breathless Kiki, she opened her eyes to look at Maxs an blinked when they were black an in a flash back to maxs he kissed her again a whispered words that made her core tighten an heart skip a beat " this isnt over you will be mine before we go home" and gave her behind a tap before walking back to the gang. she was glad he walked away she had to wrap her head round what the hell had just happened her head was spinning 'What did he mean by his an what was he planning on doing to make her his an where the hell didnt that kiss come from' she had to snap out of it she managed to pull her self togther an walk back to the car but still couldnt keep her cheeks from blushing when she caught Maxs eye.

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