WHO'S THE KILLER?

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Character :
Aiko Reyes
Denise San Chez
Daniel San Chez
Kim Cruz
Jake Luna
Lilian Garcia
Ray Aguinaldo
Officer Mark
Kosa Garcia






Narrator  :  Denise was heading home with her friends but they suddenly stopped in their tracks
Denise  :  Oh my god is that Kosa!
Kim  :  What the hell!
Aiko  :  Kosa this isn’t funny…stop it
Kim  :  Oh my god
Aiko  :  slap him to check if he’s really dead
Narrator  :  Kim hesitates but does what he’s told
Kim  :  …
Aiko  :  We have to find out who did this
Kim  :  I agree
Denise  :  First we have to find out who’s the killer
( Scene Change )
Narrator  :  They have to investigate the murder like junior detectives who went to investigate the matter
Denise  :  Guys look it’s our upperclassmen
Lilian  :  Huh Denise ? What are you guys doing here ?
Denise  :  Well…how should I say this
Aiko  :  Lilian your brother is…
Lilian  :  is what ?
Aiko  :  Is…Dead
Lilian  :  ha ha now stop fooling around and tell me the truth
Aiko  :  I wish we were kidding…
Kim  :  …
Denise  :  …
Lilian  :  this can’t be happening
Ray  :  I refuse to believe it…
Daniel  :  Why who killed her!
Denise  :  we don’t know were still investigating the matter right now
Ray  :  no not my best friend….
Jake  :  calm down Lily were going to find out who killed your brother and put them into jail I promise
Narrator  :  he hold out his pinky finger to hers
Lilian  :  well this is a promise
Jake  :  and I will not break it
( Scene Change )
Narrator  :  the students were walking near the schools gate but they spotted something
Denise  :  is that
Aiko  :  a bloody knife
Narrator  :  Aiko picks up the suspicious knife it had blood dripping
Ray  :  it has a name on it in the back
Denise  :  how do you know this ?
Narrator  :  Denise asked a little suspicious at Ray
Ray  :  because I had the same knife if you purchase a knife from that store you have to put your name on it
Daniel  :  well then let’s read it
Narrator  :  they were shocked to see the name of the knife “Kim Cruz”
Lilian  : huh? Why did Kim do this ?
Aiko  :  I know why
Narrator  :  Aiko knew that Kim was jealous of Kosa but she didn’t think he’ll go this far
>FLASHBACK<
( Near the school’s gate )
Narrator  :  Aiko was going back to school because she forgotten something but…she wasn’t prepared for what she might see next
Kim  :  Kosa let’s talk.
Kosa  :  okay?
Kosa  :  so what do you want to talk about
Denise  :  *eves dropping on their conversation*
Kim  :  is it true that you confessed to Denise?
Kosa  :  no but I’m planning on confessing to her this Friday why ?
Kim  :  well before you can ruin my dream I’m going to ruin yours.
Kosa  :  Hey what are you!
Narrator  :  with that said Kim stabbed Kosa and carried him near the tree Kosa Loved.
Narrator  :  Aiko ran away from there before Kim could even spot her
>End of flashback<
Denise  :  I’m going to confront Kim about this
Aiko  :  you shouldn’t go anywhere near kim you’re too important
Denise  :  I’m not!
Aiko  :  why can’t you just let me do this for you Kosa!
Denise  :  so you only see me as Kosa…..
Aiko  :  no Denise that’s not what I you know what just forget it
Narrator  :  Aiko dialed the police to file a case of an murder
Jake  :  aiko what are you doing?
Daniel  :  lets face it Jake Kim’s going to be arrested because of what he did.
Ray  :  he’s getting karma
Narrator  :  the police arrived
Officer Mark  :  so you are sure that this guy is the one who did it right
Aiko  :  yes we have proof if you don’t believe it
Officer Mark  :  no no I believe it. It’s just hard to think that a high school student will be able to do a crime
( Scene Change )
( The gate )
Kim  :  I’m so glad you visited me Denise
Denise  :  kim you are going to be executed in this jail . So I’m breaking all of my contact with you
Kim  :  no don’t leave me too please
Denise  :  you did crushed Kosa’s dream but it lead to your Death.
Narrator  :  with that Denise never saw Kim again and Kim died in the jail feeling guilty . The End
Moral  :  don’t kill someone out of jealousy because Karma will get to you .

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 24, 2023 ⏰

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