The princess of elements

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The princess of elements is about a 16 year old, Arabella, who discovers a huge secret about herself that will change her life forever. she is not happy to find out her life was a lie and she keeps uncovering more secrets that just annoy her more.

I found that the book, it wasn't badly written, but it wasn't the best. I found that it took a while to get to the point, the one I was looking for, and it confused me a lot. but that's my opinion and, take it from me, books are hard to write, but the more people wright the better they get, and to my understanding, this is yoursecretnerd's first book. I enjoyed the story, but as I said not the writing style for me. To me the ending felt like the middle of the book though, like it should have been carried on a bit more, but it was better the some of the stories I have read in the past. I appreciated this book and I hope that yoursecretnerd will write more, I thank everyone that writes their stories on watt-pad. So through all that.

I rate the princess of elements; 5/10

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