I know I am going to loose so readers because i rewrote some of this story again, but I hate the lack of character development and jumpy relationship betwee Eliza and Jacob.
So to those of you who stayed, enjoy a slightly better story and please comment if you feel lead. I love when I get comments on my work. If you are going to give criticism though, do it constructively.
YOU ARE READING
Moving Forward - J. Black
FanfictionIn a world of vampires and werewolves, you can't control fate; but you can fight it, right?
