Zatima Rewrite

Chapter 5: Dancing

(Zac and Fatima arrive at the hotel.)

Zac: Tima wake up, we're here 

Fatima grumbles: We are?

Zac: Yep.

(The driver pulls up to the front.)

Jeremy: Alright, you guys are free to get out now. 

(Zac gets out and takes Fatima's hand and gets her out of the car.)

Fatima: Wow! This is beautiful.

Zac: You know what else is beautiful?

Fatima: Let me guess. Karen?

Zac gives her the side eye: No, you. 

Jeremy clears his throat: Don't forget to check out the ballroom tonight!

(He drives off.)

Zac: I wonder why he wants us to go to the ballroom so much. 

Fatima: Who cares? Let's just go check in. I need a hot shower like right now. 

Zac laughs: Ok babe let's go.

(Later that evening Fatima and Zac are chilling in their room. 

Zac: I'm bored as fuck. 

Fatima: Well you wanna get a drink of something?

Zac: Nah, my stomach is still full from when we went to that Mexican restaurant. 

(Zac then had an idea. He looked at Fatima with bedroom eyes hoping she would look. She then looked at him.)

Fatima: Babe no.

Zac: Come on. We haven't done it in a while. 

Fatima: Maybe later. 

Zac: Fine. 

Zac: Wait? Didn't that driver guy say something about the ballroom?

Fatima: Yea, I think about how it looked pretty at night or something like that. 

Zac: Wanna go see?

Fatima: I don't really feel like dancing right now.

Zac: We don't have to dance if you don't want to.  We can just check out the place. Please? Just for a few minutes. 

(Zac gives Fatima cute eyes.)

Fatima: Alright fine! You always give me cute eyes. 

Zac: Bet 

Fatima: Let me get my dress out of the suitcase. 

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Zac: You almost ready? It's been an hour. 

Fatima: Almost done. Okay, I'm getting out right now. 

(She steps out in a white dress with a half-golden glittered triangle on her chest. Her hair is in an updo.)

Zac: Oooh girl you look so sexy.

Fatima blushed: Thanks. Your suit looks hot. 

(Zac and Fatima get to the ballroom and see people dancing, Many are in their best attire and the pianist is playing "Natural Woman". )

Zac: You sure you don't wanna dance? It's one of our favorite songs. 

Fatima rolled her eyes: Fine.

(Zac pulled Fatima to the dance floor and it wasn't long until they started dancing with the rest.)

Zac: Remember when we first met?

Fatima: Yea when I had to bail your ass out of jail. 

Zac: Yeah but I fell in love with you. And now you're my girlfriend. 

Fatima: You weren't acting like I was your girlfriend when Karen tried to kiss you.  

Zac: For the last time I told you that I don't love her anymore. 

Fatima: Do you mean it?

Zac: Yes! 

Fatima: I don't believe you. 

Zac: Well you should! I planned this whole trip so we could reconnect and fix this relationship. 

Fatima: Fixing what? Cause you know damn well I'm not the one that has problems. 

Zac: Are you serious right now?! For the past three days, you've been mad at me. I've been asking you what I did wrong. And you know she kissed me, she told you herself! Can you just tell me, please? 

Fatima: ...

Zac: Oh so you're not gonna talk to me now huh? Am I not good enough for you?!

Fatima: Just shut up Ian! 

(Realizing what she just said Fatima put her hand up to her mouth and ran away back to their room.)

Zac: Fatima!