Things that annoy me in PJO/HoO fanficd

PJO/HoO at school

Warning:I'll probably be mean here. Nothing is in a order, just complaining in a random order. Very short, will have more parts as I read other fanfics.

1.The plots are so cliché, literally

Honestly it always starts off by Chiron or the gods calling the demigods and telling them that they're going to high school. I don't really mind but atleast the way they say it just doesn't make sense like, it's out of character. And the demigods are just like.

"What? why?" Or sound annoyed which is normal, because they had bad experinces with it. But it doesn't mean they just don't want to go just that they know they will have a harder time then other kids because if a monster comes in, it will lead to disaster.

But no, they just are annoyed and don't want to go.

It's like, the same plot in every single one.

2. The characters.

The characters just don't act like they do in the book and I know you can't capture the characters perfectly but every single demigod, no just call them ocs at that point, because the demigods act so rude, like I know they can be rude but not that dam rude.

Like it just makes me want to give up on the story completely, because like the kindest and most innocent demigod can be so rude just for the story and it just gets really annoying.

Like literaly, Percy is such a dick in those fics.

3. The Characters made

Right so the characters that people make, why the FUCK would YOU make characters and make some of them assholes. And why would you make some of the girls seem like "Sl-ts"?

And boys, they're also assholes.

And Percy's mortal friends, they're so nosy like, if Percy says he doesn't feel comftorble saying something, they should respect that, they shouldn't be dicks and just try and push him to just say it.

Like I don't mind if there are bullies just don't like make them have so many bad traits, it's just really hard to read the fanfics.

4.Grammar

I don't have much of a say in this but my grammar is at least better then most of them.

It's also really difficult to tell which character is talking and what's going on in the background.

Like I'm making PJO/HoO time travel fanfic and I'm looking over everything just to see if there is anything wrong, but these people don't even seem to even check their spelling.

Like, try to have a few chapters before you start to update so you just a bit prepared with at least better quality content.

[Will continue when I feel like it because this is mostly opinions and I want to see what you guys hate about certain aus in the PJO/HoO fanfics before I start writing again, because oh my gods, there are so many fanfics out there to target.]

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