Abducted

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So you decided to stick around for chapter 2! Means a lot! Now I promise you just time for some action!

Immortals is booming through my ears as I run my 14th mile.My legs feel like snapping and I'm tired as tired could be. Once coach blows his whistle we walk a lap and leave. I'm urging for it to blow. I love running but I also love art and I'm tired. The loud whistle screeches and I start walking slowly. After I'm off the nature trail I say goodbye to coach and head for the alley. The school is in the middle of the suburbs and the city route and I walk to the city. I have plenty of time because practice ends at nine and I like to be there at ten. Earlier than 10:15. I walk my way there causally.

I reach the alle,I see my unfinished art and begin to pull my oil paints out of my bag. I know this is illegal but you gotta gave fun sometimes right? Cassidy,James,Margo, and Zander should be here in 15. Cassidy doesn't paint but she hangs out and takes pictures. She loves taking pictures of art and nature sometimes Its just so annoying but in the end I appreciate them.

I see 4 people all In hoodies. But I know for a fact they're not my group. All appeared to be men and all of them carried weapons All with different looking . Definitely NOT my group. So here I am trapped in an alleyway and now scared.
I can hear a cars engine revving. I know exactly what they're plans are going to be.
They're going to kidnap me...
"If you move I shoot you dead pretty lady." said a musky raspy voice.
I stand still
"Now we're gonna just come and see you baby" says a younger voice.
I'm not your 'Baby' I think to myself but If I said that well I don't think that would help the situation
I scream as loud as I've ever screamed before. I didn't move I just screamed for help I smirked in my mind.
"HELLLLLLLLLPPP IM BEING KIDNAPPED" I shrill
"Not smart" one of them remarked then sprinted over and bashed my head into the wall. He didn't knock one me hard enough for unconicence ness to happen but my head was running wild .
"If you scream again..." he says firmly
"what? what are you gonna do" I say back not bratily but firm as well It's to show strength. I know that if they think I'm a brat they' ll kill me
"I will slit your throat" he replies puting the knife
against my neck
Then he slapped me. The stinging ran across my whole body. I was tempted to cry but I couldn't let myself
"well we'll Just see about that" I say and bite his arm drawing blood.
I then start sprinting faster than I ever had before having 911 on speed dial.
" That Fiesty little one" I hear a man from the group say
I hear them get into the car. The engine revs.
my phone drops and now I know I'm screwed.
I start running faster and faster but the car makes a sharp turn and blocks me I try going around but out pops that young bastard and grabs me by the hips. He yanks me in the car. Out of furry and defense I punch him in the jaw and he loses his firm grip.
"That little shit". He yells.
As I grip for the door handle I am stabbed with a tranquilizer and I slowly blackout seeing fuzz of my captors in one big blur.
I am kidnapped....
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Yay chapter 2
a little bit more colorful language and more action
hope you enjoyed!!