A World That Only God Knows

Prologue Part 2

Suddenly, a giant cloud of electric force, surrounded all of Cranford and Summit, with the bridge being in the middle of everything happening. Everyone stopped. It was like, time itself was frozen...... There in of the middle of the bridge there was an even more dense cloud of electric force but some how I could still move. Even though i could move, I still couldn't. I was frozen in shock because in front of me, was a massive entity, that seemed of pure light, but pure darkness. It was so big that a part of it was in the sea next to the bridge. But, the part that scared me the most was that the entity seemed to be staring down at me, my new dad and sister, and my mother.

" I am Cight (k-ight) lord of light and chaos. No mortal is allowed to see me, for this you shall be punished severely."

I just stood there, looking at him terrified that it I made one move that he would kill me, my new sister had also the same idea except she had closed her eyes and seem to be listening to everything around her.

My parents were screaming and starting to run away, horrified at what they had just saw. "Shut Up!!" said Cight as he seemed to take thunder from the heavens, and slammed it onto my parents. " Ops... Maybe i killed them a little too much," he with a maniacal voice.

I was traumatized, horrified, and felt like throwing up right there and by the looks from Ava so was she. Then the entity looked, at us directly, he said "You have big eyes, Sean, I will take them as punishment, but for killing your parents I will give you something in replace. Gods Eyes.

"Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!" I screamed as the next second I felt a searing pain in both of my eyes. I felt my knees buckle, saw black spots dancing across my eye and I fell to the ground as I herd the entity, say:

"Now Ava..."

*Blackout

I woke up, still in the same position that I was when i blacked , then I remembered, everything that seemed a to had a few moments ago... wait, the entity, Cight, took away my eyes but I am still able to see, these must be the Gods Eyes he was talking about. Then I suddenly, I jerked up, remembered, and screamed out loud, " Mom, Dad........ Ava!" as I was trying not to let's the tears come so violently.

I scurried around and tried to find them, see if what had happened was just a dream. It wasn't.

Up until those moments I had not been aware of my surroundings, I could still feel the cloud of electric around the two cities, the God-like entity was not there anymore, the people of both cities were all looking upwards, as if there was the gigantic flying elephant, Dumbo XD. I looked up too and saw to my surprising what looked to be like hollow cylinders just appearing in the sky. Then I saw little things, come out of them. They slowly came closer. Someone yelled out: "Aliens!!" I could tell that no one actually could tell what they were so they just assumed they were aliens planning to takeover our world..... I hope not.

Just wondering.. How is my story so far?