My Sleepy Brain... Help?

Harry is found

Harry awoke to it being very dark and cold. He at first thought he was dead then remembered what had happened, Dumbledore had kidnapped him. He could hear Albus in the other room talking to himself. Harry sighed quietly as he readjusted a little in his binds. He closed his eyes and fell into his mindscape, he knew he'd need to keep a clear and collected state of mind. So he set to meditating. On the outside it looked like he was still unconscious however that couldn't be further from the truth. Albus came back into his room and looked at him. He said something so soft Harry couldn't hear before walking back out of the room. He would deal with this until he escaped, or someone came to rescue him. He couldn't die, they needed him.
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Harry felt like it had been forever, really though it had been about a week. Harry wasn't sure exactly how many times Albus would come in just to stare at him. Harry really believed his old Headmaster had lost it, well more than he already had. Still it was getting harder and harder to keep up his meditation. He felt like he needed to destroy something, preferably Dumbledore. For now though Harry kept up his act. Albus wouldn't know what hit him.
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Harry woke to strange noises, multiple voices,  something he hadn't heard in a week. Harry wondered if he was hearing things, he wouldn't put it past himself, it had been a week without food or water, still Harry peaked his eyes open, Albus was standing right there in front of him. "Ah, Harry my boy. Finally awake, I truly hate to do this but you really left me with no choice. After all, you were meant to marry young Ginerva,  not enslave young men. Your parents would surely be disappointed in you—." All of a sudden the cut off, he fell to the floor in a flash of purple light. Harry was relieved yay finally he was safe. Until Neville stepped into the room, Harry wilted slightly, "Hi Nev." he croaked out, "Don't you "Hi Nev" me, you had us all worried. Also when we get back you have to punish Severus, he broke one of my rules. Even though it did help us find you. Also, it's very clear those men love you. Or at the very least like you and are willing to get to know you. So we are going home, you are getting a meal and a drink then you will deal with your slaves. Tomorrow we will have our chat. Understood." All Harry could do was agree meekly, after all no one should ever mess with his older brother.
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I'm sorry, about the ending. I thought it kind of worked, have a lovely night or evening to morning. I think I'll post all of now, it's currently 12:10 Am. Goodnight y'all!!