Rewrite of the original story as I wasn't happy with how things were going with it. I also feel like I was waaaaaay too ambitious, so now I'm doing something that I feel is more creative to me.
I hope I haven't upset anyone with my decision here
We begin are story in the dupeng cheng bakery where Tom a rather large man is currently on the phone talking to an old friend
Tom: "He is coming back here, I thought he wouldn't return unless something happened to his parents"
Max Tennyson: "his parents are dead and it was in there will that you take in there son and raise him as if he was your own"
Tom: "When is yn arriving?"
Max:"Pretty soon in fact he may already be in paris by now"
Tom:"Thank you for letting me know"
Tom and Max said their goodbyes, then hung up the phone call. Tom then proceeded to tell his wife of the news and that decided to let their daughter Marinette. know that when she returns home.
Time skip to chibi Marinette and Tikki talking
Marinette: "Look alya I can't ask adrien out he's perfect and I'm well me"
Alya:" Which is why me and Nino are here to help you"
Nino:" Yeah and dudette but it will have to wait since class is about to start"
the trio ran into the classroom seeing now signs of Adrien at all
the teacher Miss Bustier walks into the classroom and greets the class noticing Adriens absence.
Miss Bustier: "Has anyone heard from adrien?"
Nino: No Miss Bustier his dad probably forced him to stay home again"
Miss Bustier: "I'll look into it with the principle later but now let start today's class which is focusing on the aliens."
Timeskip brought to you by Miss Bustier talking about the events classic ben 10
A moth like creature lands in an alleyway before a bright red flash is seen from within the alley
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Once the red flash disappeared a teenage boy with was in the moths place wearing mostly red and black clothes.
(A/n: your essentially wearing albedos outfit but with whatever hair look you want which I'm not good at describing so you'll need to fill in the blanks to where i haven't mentioned your hairstyle)
The boy walks out of the alley and heads towards the dupeng cheng bakery.
Another timeskip
the boy walks into the bakery being greeted by Tom and his wife Sabine
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Tom: "Hello there you must be yn, Max told me you could be coming here, I'm Tom and this is my wife Sabine"
Sabine: "Hello dear"
yn: "Hey Sorry if I caused you any trouble"
Tom: "Nonese my boy you didn't cause any trouble foro us at all and your stuff should be in marinette's room upstairs"
Sabine:" We didn't have any spare rooms available so I hope you don't mind sharing marionettes room"
yn:" I don't mind at all. I'll go and get my stuff set up now"
yn left the two and went upstairs into marinette's room not realising that both alya and marinette where in there already
Marinette: YN YOUR HERE!" she yelled out in shock as her parents didn't tell her you would be coming back
Alya ran over to yn and tackle hugged him with yn hugging her back showing of his watch to marinette and Tikki who is currently hiding.
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Ok guys this is the beginning of the rewrite which will have chapter like this in it where there isn't an episode scripts involved and some episodes involved. this also takes place after the volpina episode but andriend hasn't told anyone about the missing book yet because there other stuff going on with it that i'm not gonna reveal just yet. I'm also going to be doing the episode in my own random order so for example dark cupid hasn't happened yet. same thing with time breaker.
anyways feel free to ask questions in the comments and make harem member suggestions.
