The Quesar and the Esper Girls: Lighting the Darkness Apart

Author's Note: Explaining the Story and Premise

Okay, so, if you guys know me, this will be another new story that I may or may not update for a while for so long and I may have forgotten it unless I have the idea clasped to my head.

But after seeing it on a certain.... website, I refuse to let it go since it is not in me to ignore it.

Okay, so here is the idea.

This is another Players in YGGDRASIL story self inserting to another one of 'fan no hitori's' grotesque and beautiful mind of his doujinshi comics.

This is 'Esper Girl Amputation Union' and of all the things I can expect in this doujinshi hentai comic like rape, nothing can prepare me on how nauseating it is.

If you should know the prologue, here is the picture.

But anyway, the premise is that the 'hentai' is where the world is being subjected to a lot of criminals going out of control and people used genetic engineering and a lot of psychic powers at the force.

A cliche of good vs bad?

Not really.

Our heroes, the Synapse, scantily clad girls who are bodacious Miss Fanservice or lolis, have traits and personalities that made them hard to root for (no matter how beautiful and sexy they are) and it didn't take much to actually root for the bad guys as well.

Said bad guys are all brutal, psychotic, rapists who not only rape girls that are clearly younger than them, some even being a child but also subjected them to some of the most horrendous of experiments that makes them amputated or being treated like a pig or purely tortured and seeing girls suffer from such a thing is just disturbing to the core that it makes other 'fan no hitori' works much lighter in comparison because at least the gory and gruesome aspects are drawn less graphically.

Overall, it is a huge turn off and is one only the most sick and depraved would enjoy.

So, why am I doing this? Because I want to see if I can make it better and less horrible than it looks and those girls need saving and being better with a much more competent leader that gives them a higher function and psychological reparation.

Also doing this chapter instead of a Character Information is because I am running short since I am on a trip and I don't have a picture for a Quesar race.

For scientific terms, I don't know. This is my first time I heard that there is something, some sort of galactic cosmic power or something that is called, a Quasar.

In Dungeons and Dragons, the Quesar are a race of holy constructs who are gaunt humanoids of intense light and has the power to command said light to blind their enemies, disintegrate them and get healed by said light with their weakness is that their powers are diminished when they are completely submerged in darkness.

And I don't actually have the images for such a character unless you guys have any ideas.

Overall, this will be a story I am almost wanted to do out of a sense of fixing the world and so, again, if you have any ideas, let me know in the comments below.

With that out of the way...

Ciao...