Use fucking punctuation?!.
Tris isn't a gorgeous model that's famous
Describe scenery not faces or outfits
They don't fricken sing modern shit
They can use phones but not everything is an I phone unless your writing divergent high school
If you write Divergent High make it different but not stupid OH MY FUCK they don't have to sing
Divergent High-
Tobias can't sing nor can anyone else it's annoying stop
Don't write about sex what are you 12
Tris was never ever EVER sporty or active
Tris's parents don't beat her
NO PREGNANT noo no no it's not possible Tris is afraid of sex so no no no Peter doesn't rape people he isn't an asshole neither does Eric
Not ever girl has fucking waist long hair
use a REAL antagonist
Tris isn't rich neither is anyone else
Don't rush the love story there is no such thing as love at first sight
Okay I really hate when people say that Four cheats on Tris with Lauren like no nobody gives two fucks about Lauren.
LYNN IS GAY!!!!!!!! It's okay she doesn't like Peter or Eric so stop that shit.
Like for real don't write about sex grow up!!
We need more!!!!!-
Daughter divergent
Uriah and Marlene stories
Uriah and Christina
Zeke and SHAUNA LIKE FOR REAL THEY'RE SO under rated. :(
We need less-
If Tris is gonna come back to life don't you think they would've held her captive and erased her memory duh!!
Uriah and Tris
Hell no they're not a thing
Can someone write about Christina and Uriah please!!!!
If you're going to end your story go to the settings and fucking tell us if not use an Authors Note
If your gonna end your in the middle of the sentence story just delete it all together if not then CONTINUE THE STORY your not Peter Van Houten
You can't have curves and be slim
If you write Divergent High then her parents don't die and Caleb doesn't go to college early and she's not fucking rich
Don't use modern shit like Forever 21 and Victoria's Secret
Did you like forget about Hector's existence like include him
Only Tobias gets beaten nobody else
Do not name Tobias Toby it's stupid it's not cute don't add annoying shit like that.
Tris and Tobias have not been life long Bestie's the reunited no hell no
Someone write a decent story
Don't include Tfios shit nooooooooooooooooooooooooo
It would be nice if someone wrote a daughter divergent without Tris because she doesn't just magically come to life to be mother of the year.
Blonde hair blue eyes really No it's over rated.
It's okay if Lynn is gay.
Caleb isn't that much of an ass hole that he kidnapped they're kids to test shit like no.
Eric and Peter don't rape anyone the couldn't give a shit less about anyone else.
Lauren isn't a hoe Nita is.
Tobias isn't that much of a bitch
Girls don't throw themselves at Four.
Why high school why not college?!!!
Because if they're not gonna go to class then why even write about school.
FOUR HAS TATTOOS YOU CANT SEE HIS SCARS
Tris doesn't name her kids Augustus and Hazel no.
Don't describe people describe the scene.
They don't always have to give birth to a girl because it's more likely for them to have a boy because Tris has a brother Tobias is a boy they don't have a girl they can have both.
Don't make the characters dress like sluts and when they train they don't fall in love with iniates and iniates don't fall in love with them Tris is supposed to be ugly.
Okay like literally we need a lot more-
Uriah and Marlene
Uriah and Christina
Zeke and Shauna
Oh yaeah I forgot Will doesn't get to live and her parents stay dead Will died before everyone else stupid.
End of discussion for nowwwww.
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