The Wolf, Tiger, and Wolf pup

Introduction

Hello, My name is Jack and this is my first time posting one of my stories on this website.

I decided to do this because I want to publish this story printed in public and I wanted to show it here on Wattpad first so I can get some criticism on how I can improve the story with the pacing and the direction it is going, of course I know what the end is for my story I just wanted to see what ideas you might have for improving the way to the ending.

I'm sure you read the description of this story but I'll try to explain it better here in my own words.

The story is set in a world where Humans and anthropomorphic animals co-exist together (similar to something like The movie Cats Don't Dance and the Jack Wolfgang comic) and a grey wolf named Antony lives in the countryside with his young son named Lucas. The two have a loving and caring relationship with each other and go out for hikes on the weekends.

But when Lucas gets kidnapped by a corrupt child protection service named C.H.A.N.G.E, Antony must journey across the country to find and save his son from being converted by the people higher up corrupting the young pup with their teachings.

The story is kind of like Puss in Boots The last wish, but with a Studio Ghibli edge to it with the world-building and some of the hopeful and darker moments in it.

I hope you like the story I have written so far and I can't wait to see your thoughts on it.