Abhishek's surprise visit

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In this chapter, abhiya are dating since a while now, here they have had a fuddu fight the previous night due to stupid reasons. Abhishek is flying to Mumbai to surprise and pacify her.

Abhishek reached airport and rings Jiya's mom.[Guys here, the families are good with each other]
Abhi: Hello aunty, kaise ho?
Mom: Mein thik hu beta, tu bata?!
Abhi: Aunty actually maine Mumbai mein land kiya abhi just. Mujhe puchna tha Jiya ghar pe hi haina?
Mom: Haan! Mein bahar hu 1 week ke liye kal hi aayi pr meri Jiya se abhi baat hui voh ghar pe hi he. Kyu? Tum dono baat nahi kr rahe? Usse pata nahi tum aane wale ho?
Abhi: Nahi aunty mujhe use surprise krna hai voh thodi upset thi kal isiliye.
Mom: OK beta, take care aur use thoda sambalna aur apna bhi dhyaan rakhna. Bye!
Abhi: Haanji aunty. Bye, take care.

Abhi reached her house and rings the bell.
The house help opens the door and greets him.
She tells her that Jiya is in her room and Abhi quietly moves towards it.
He opens the door and she stares at him.
Abhi while walking towards her: Hanjii!! Kya Haal hai ? Kaisa laga surprise?!!
Hugs her while she's sitting on her bed.
She does not respond his hug.
Abhi: Yaar ab kya gussa krna?! Banda itna dur se aaya hai hug toh kr atleast.
She does not respond and continues to stare at him.
Abhi: Okay? Seriously are you gonna behave like this? I want to spend quality time with you common now!
Tere liye aaya mein aunty se pucha tu hai ki nahi ghar mujhe surprise krna tha and look at you! Aise kon reaction deta hai Hadd hai yar! Acha hua vlog nahi kr raha vrna bejati ho jati.
Jiya was quietly listening to him without expressing any emotion.
Abhi: Abhi bol toh kuch ki jau mein vapis?
Jiya : Jaa
Abhi: Acha beta ek baar gaya na aaunga nahi vapis. (while smiling and tickling her)
Jiya: Jaake dikha phir bol
Abhi : challenge Mt kr jaa skta hu vaise bhi bohot chahne vale hai Mumbai mein bhi!
Jiya gave a jealous look to him.
Abhi: Dekh jealousy horahi hai. Pyaar krna hai pr gussa bhi hona hai wow
Jiya : Kab jaane vala hai tu?
Abhi: bas joh kaam krne aaya hu voh krke jaunga
Jiya: kya kaam?
Abhi winks: Jaise tuzhe toh pata nahi
Jiya : nahi pata
Abhi: ruk mein batata hu
He tickles and starts pecking her hand neck nose while looking into her eyes
Abhi: pura kaam abhi karu ?
Jiya: (while blushing) Shut-up! *Slaps his chest*
Gives him a tight hug and says 'I missed you' 'I missed you more' replies Abhi.
Jiya: Thankyou for coming, I needed you.
Abhi: Acha abhi toh bol rahi thi jaa
Jiya: nahi, nahi jaane dungi kahi! Mera hai tu sirf chipak ke rakhungi!
Abhi: ( while laughing and hugging her tightly) I love you
Jiya: love youu a million times more
Abhi: pappi kr phir
Jiya: pecks on his cheek
Abhi: picks her up throws her on her bed while ticking her.
They talk and cuddle for a while and plan for the days till he's staying.





So this is the first shot! I hope you all like it pls let me know what you want me to change or write on in the comments and pls vote if you like it! It will mean a lot to me. Thankyouu💌 #abhiya 

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