Planet of trouble

the concept

yoyoyoyo concepts!!!!!!!!!!

This story is set up for olivandria (Colonel Cage, the marshal, vice admiral, L.A.D.S.  and the lord Rexes).

I did the concept of Point Of View of everyone in a war, since i feel like focusing on one person will be biased, one sided, and paint the olivandrians as this mega evil soulless space north Korea, i wanted the reader to know that L.A.D.S. And their higher up are running it and even the soldiers of  the republic want to kill them because of their rule!

 I also gave their appearance of soldiers of olivandria.

I killed Glupski because he is not in the book olivandria and so i want to kill him off and it is a pain to write Generalissimo. And i never planned him to carry on, just like Naime, Grand marshal, and Kline. They have no purpose anymore so kill! 

the Little colonel chapter was supposed to show how shock troopers are cowered and weak and how the government covers up.

It was planned for olivandria to loose but i wanted it to make them a force of evil and to greater extent.

The shadow league make an appearance again and he was supposed to be with the child, but i scarped that.

My ideas for the ending was different, one should have hinted the L.A.D.S. Death, one where olivandria won, one olivandria lost, where both ends up in stalemate, but i stayed with setting up with the main book backstory.

There was a chapter called shadow, which played the shadow league part, but that was for when olivandrians took over and this had no purpose in final draft