chapter 1

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Na'vi language

The first time quaritch came back when the sully kids were going home. "come one we have to hurry"tuk said when a avatar came out of nowhere and grabbed her making her scream. lo'ak and spider held up there bows ready to shoot.

"put the bows down or I'll shoot!!"a soldier said pointing the gun at them with his finger on the trigger ready to shoot. lo'ak dropped his bow and arrow and looked at spider "spider put the bow down" spider put the bow down then they were captured and put to there knees as a soldier grabbed kiris hand and held it up. "quaritch look" quaritch looked at him"five fingers we've got a half breed"

"Where is Jake sully" he asked kiri but she only hissed at him then he grabbed her queue hurting her. "No don't hurt her!!" lo'ak yelled. making quaritch look at him and walk over to him.

"Show me your fingers" he said and lo'ak held up his middle fingers at him"your his ain't you" lo'ak hissed at him"your definitely his"quaritch said grabbing his queue making lo'ak yell in pain. "Where is your father" quaritch said "sorry I don't speak English to idiots" lo'ak said making quaritch pull lo'aks queue harder.

Then they heard a call it was there mother they looked at the trees and there mother did a sound so they bit the. soldier and ran but lo'ak fell from the tree hitting his head making him pass out and kiri called out to him but it was already to late. quaritch and his man grabbed him and took him kiri could only watch as her brother was taken.

As she ran she bumped into her family and they hugged each other. "where's lo'ak" Jake asked and kiri turned to him crying. "They took him they took him" neteyams heart sank as tears came down his face his little brother was taken and he couldn't save him."we'll get him back I promise" jake said hugging his family as they cried for lo'ak.

Back at the humans base lo'ak woke up not knowing where he was.then quaritch came in with a picture of Jake "where is Jake sully" quaritch asked once more but lo'ak looked confused tilting his head "idk who that is I don't remember anything"

Quaritch smirked knowing he can take advantage of this so he made a fake story "I am your father I have been looking for you for over 15 years Jake killed your mother and took you"

Quaritch did a sad face and faked his tears lo'ak looked at him and believed it. "he did that to you he took me away from you?" quaritch nodded and lo'ak hugged him crying. "I'll kill him and his family for you dad" lo'ak said and quaritch smiled knowing his story worked.

Over the pass months lo'ak has trained to kill Jake sully and his family for what they did to him.

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