A man plunged deep into the mire,
Vain and pride, that's not his desire.
An eye for luxury, his vice is greed.
Rolex and Ferrari,
Insatiable need,
Covetous and sly,
Else He'll wither and die.
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PoetryMore of my poetry I've had around; as before just looking for feedback as im really new and could do with any and all help!
III
A man plunged deep into the mire,
Vain and pride, that's not his desire.
An eye for luxury, his vice is greed.
Rolex and Ferrari,
Insatiable need,
Covetous and sly,
Else He'll wither and die.
