The final bell rang. I had to get out of there before...well nobody really knows. They just say to get out and don't stay after six. I put all my textbooks in my shoulder bag and sling it over my shoulder. As I started to gather with the rest of the rushing students, someone shoved me and I fell down. The only thing I heard was chilling laughter as everything faded to black.
I woke up in a dark room. No no no no! I thought to myself as I picked myself up. I checked the time on the wall clock. Six forty-three. I didn't know how! I bent down to put all my textbooks back in my bag, since they had fallen out. And that's when I heard it.
Teke Teke
I didn't think much of it, assuming that it was just the branches scraping against the brick building. I finished putting everything back in my bag, then I remembered the myth told amongst students.
"Don't stay after six p.m. Did you hear about the killer ghost? It'll come if you stay after school long..."
I shook my head.
"Calm down. The myth isn't true. You're just going to go back home and finish your studies."
I told myself as I walked down the wide hallway, now walking a bit faster.
Teke Teke
There it is again. The strange sound. I gulp and decide not to investigate, and speed walk to the stairs. I dash down the long stairwell, breaking into a run at the end.
Teke Teke
I ran to the main hall. And there, before me, holding a scythe, was the ghost of the school.
Although it had a scythe, it had no legs to support it. It looked like the typical Japanese school girl.
It dragged itself toward him, raising its scythe and making the horrible sound.
Teke Teke
It cut its scythe through the air, making a whistling sound. At last he realized that he was just another victim of the school ghost.
Teke Teke.i like to think ive improved