Writing advice

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Ok how do you write a dialogue with an action and then dialogue again?

Example of what I mean. (I'll try my best to explain it or tell y'all)

"Why did you wake me up (and then I want to like she checks her clock but I don't know how to write it out without it looking weird) and then she says the time after checking the clock...

So I need help...

Please...

It's in First Person by the way...

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