chapter 1 (rewrite)

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𝚃𝚑𝚒𝚛𝚍 𝙿𝙾𝚅:

Stan and Kyle had been very good friends since childhood but everything changed between them, Kyle was a scene acts like a nerd sometimes...Stan was a goth now yet he didn't change he was still an alcoholic.

[𝐅𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐡 𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤:] 9:45 pm..Saturday night.

Someone was knocking on Kyle's door non stop Kyle got up from his bed and went down stairs to see who was knocking on the door, Kyle opened the door 'who could it be..?' Kyle thought to himself the heavy rain was pouring outside while there was a storm since morning.

Kyle's parents went on a vacation for 1 week, Kyle was alone in the house Kyle's parents took Ike with them, Kyle was wondering who the person was, Kyle gently opened the door and saw stan, stan was crying he looked wet and messy while standing outside the front door "k-kyle..may I come in..?" Stan murmured as rain drops fell on his head, stan was sniffling he was crying uncontrollably Kyle let him in, stan went inside Kyle took a towel because stan was soaking wet from the rain stan then dries himself with the towel Kyle gave him, Kyle looked worried for his best friend.

"Why are you crying now dude?" Kyle asked as he looks at stan with a mixed of worried and concerned "it's about Wendy..." Stan mumbled "let me guess, she left you again?" Kyle guessed "y-yeah..how'd you know Kyle..?", " I didn't it was a guess.", "o-oh..okay..", "why don't you just break up with her like for real? She doesn't deserve you stan. You're better than that. Why do you kept on being with her when there's many other girls out there." Kyle said in a harsh tone he paused for a second "so you went all the way here just because of Wendy Testaburger? Leaving you?" Kyle said looking annoyed because of it, stan and Wendy had an off and on relationship it was annoying. Stan started to drink and became an alcoholic because of her, stan misses her day and night while drinking alcohol Kyle doesn't even know what stan sees in Wendy Testaburger, yeah she's pretty but is it all just because of that..?
(I do NOT hate Wendy Testaburger😍 but since to continue and rewrite this story I need her as a pretty VILLAIN can't blame me>:) I can't just think of anyone else lmao😔)

"You know I can't Kyle..i love her..and she loves me too..i-i...i just don't know why she left me and she's the perfect girl..i lover her a lot.." Stan said and tears rolling down his cheeks again "how do you even know she really loves you too? If she really does love you then she shouldn't had left you." Kyle said he was getting mad at stan and annoyed because of this, stan kept ranting about how Wendy left him or about Wendy day and night everyday it's so annoying. "You don't get it Kyle, I truly loved her you don't know what it feels like leaving someone you truly loved!", " yeah you're right I may not know what it feels like but leaving her is the best for you stan why can't you understand me for once?! I'm trying to convince you to leave her to have a good life than this." Kyle yelled at stan  with a harsh tone 'I shouldn't have done that, I messed up, no no no please.' Kyle thought to himself, Kyle looked at stan who looked mad "stan I'm—" Kyle tried apologizing but was cut off my stan, "save it Kyle I don't need you anymore you're just ruining it, all of it feels the worse for me now I'm going to leave here's your damn towel." Stan gave the towel he had a mad expression and his tone was serious and harsh, Stan left Kyle's house, Kyle felt his heart shattered into pieces, tiny pieces

After what happened, Kyle tried calling and texting stan many times apologizing but nothing works stan ignored Kyle and even blocked him, Kyle thought stan and him were super best friends. Kyle felt horrible and terrible now Kyle tried talking to stan at school too yet he was ignored again Kyle felt hopeless and was crying in his room he wondered if stan and him are still friends does stan still care for him..? Kyle wished stan still does but for now he doesn't.

He started to change..he was being mean to kyle and bullied Kyle like cartman does, Kyle left stan bully him for months but he couldn't bare the pain anymore not only stan was in pain he was in pain too, Kyle started being mean to stan as well he wanted revenge and karma get into stan Kyle lost his hope on being friends with stan again, Kyle felt like stan was his second enemy..only if Kyle hadn't yelled at him maybe things were going good right now..right..?

[𝐄𝐧𝐝 𝐨𝐟 𝐟𝐥𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐛𝐚𝐜𝐤] 2:34 pm Tuesday afternoon

Kyle was walking in the school hallway carrying his books, Kyle saw stan talking to his new 'goth friends' as stan was leaning in Kyle's locker.

Kyle went towards to his locker "can you move away from my locker..?" Kyle asked politely "absolutely not what are you going to do about it nerd?" Stan said harshly a bit not moving any time soon his friends left already going for a new spot while he stayed just to annoy Kyle. You may call me a nerd because I'm smart but it's a good thing I'm not some stupid goth looking-like emo alcoholic guy like you." Kyle shouted a little harshly back at stan Kyle was done being polite and nice to stan, stan suddenly grabbed Kyle by the collar and pinned Kyle against the wall he was almost choking Kyle  "let me the hell go you emo!" Kyle yelled at stan "I want you to know what your stupid place here nerd." Stan had a serious yet mad expression on his face "let me go!" Kyle shouted again the more he shout the more the grip gets tight, stan was choking kyle, there was a teacher walking by stan quickly let go of Kyle to avoid getting in trouble, if the teacher saw both of them they were sure where they'll end up the principals office. The teacher was finally gone.

"Remember you'll regret messing with me kyle." Stan threatened Kyle he was serious "as if you will you just can't admit I'm better than you!" 'God..! I shouldn't have said that now I'm in big trouble!!' Kyle thought to himself "you don't know what's coming for you nerd." After that stan left, Kyle let out a heavy long sigh "finally he left..i thought he would continue to choke me or something I better go to my class now..geez.." Kyle mumbled to himself he started walking towards his next class.

After the school ended, Kyle walked out of the school like everyone else did Kyle was walking in the streets it was dark a but good things the lamp post is bright enough for Kyle to see where he's going, after awhile someone suddenly grabbed him from behind and pushed Kyle into a nearby dark alley Kyle lost his balance and fell to the ground he couldn't see who it was because of the darkness, "w-who are you..get away from me you creep!" Kyle shouted, he heard a familiar voice "oh dear Kyle i told you to remember your stupid place." Stan said creply "s-stay back! What the hell are you planning to do.." Kyle yelled he was getting terrified on what's happening "you'll see kyle.." Stan grabbed Kyle by the collar and choked him again..kyle felt like he couldn't breathe anymore he saw Stan holding a knife Kyle felt helpless and breathless the last thing he knew he saw pitch black and hearing Stan's voice laughing creepyly.

  Kyle opened his eyes waking up in the hospital bed laying on it his mom Sheila was there, Ike and his dad too. "Bubbie! You're awake are you okay?!" Sheila said in a panicked tone she was worried for Kyle "mom I'm okay..what happened..?" Kyle asked  his mind was still spinning in circle "well someone saw you in the alley last night fainted.!" Said sheila "wait..stan didn't kill me..? Or even stabbed me..?" Kyle mumbled he quickly looks at his body "what did you say bubbie?", " n-nothing mom..!", "oh alright..well me, Ike and your dad are going now call the nurse if you need anything alright bye bubbie..!", " bye..bye..!" Ike said and looked at Kyle again as sheila and his dad were out of the room Ike followed them too..kyle was all alone in the hospital room to rest he wondered if stan hurt him or stabbed him maybe it was just an imagination of himself kyle looked around the room he felt uncomfortable at it but tried to brush it off and ignore it he felt sleepy and starting to close his eyes and get some rest.

(This has been rewritten y'all.)
(Old)1226 words - (new)1548 words

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