1st person POV
(Kim Dan)
I was sleeping peacefully until.
THERES NO BETTER FEELING IN THE WHOLE WIDE WORLD
Is the first thing I heard around 11:59 in the fucking night. Is this man actually serious? Well no shit Sherlock he's a Kpop Stan.
I thought I should take a walk outside even though it's late at night. Okay fuck it I'll take a walk.
I took my jacket and got out of the house, I took a long my phone also. I was just walking through the night and saw a convenience store, why not I go buy something? I thought for myself, I went to the store nearby and bought a few snacks, (ramen, ice cream and a slushy) I payed the cashier and I went back home. I prayed to myself that my sister was deep asleep, I went back to my room and heard no more music coming from my brothers room, I sighed one relief and drank the slushy I bought.
I went back to sleep and the night went on normally
(3rd person view)
This is the old work I got
HELPP