Falling for a Vampire

Chapter 3 first encounter

I'm sorry if my last two chapters were a little boring. I promise to make the next two to be really interesting (I will try).
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Lee minrae POV
I was soon finished changing and was heading outside to meet xiumin so we could have our "sibling bonding" session. "Minrae -ah, let's go" I heard xiumin call so I left to find him. We soon left to go to the mall, on our way their xiumin asked me to call him oppa(older male) so that we could be closer and he gave me a nickname, Minnie. I felt relieved that I was close with oppa and that he wasn't mean like I had thought. I thought maybe...just maybe I could have a normal life for once.
We parked our car and hopped off to head to mall when oppa got a text. He looked at it and turned around to me with a huge grin and said "Minnie are you ok with meeting my friends... I told them about you and they want to meet you and they happened to be in the mall..." He left of waiting for my reply patiently. I nodded at him while grinning at him. /if oppa is this nice, I am pretty sure that his friends will be as nice or even more nice/ I thought to myself. After I got my head around through my thoughts, I looked for oppa and found myself lostin the middle of the mall and he was no where to be seen. I panicked and tried looking for him, I didn't have his number so the situation got even worse.
At first, I was walking whilst looking for oppa but then reality hit that I don't know my new home address so I panicked and started to run. I was running whilst looking side to side and not in front that I bumped into something hard and wall like. I fell to the floor with a huge thud, I slowly looked up to see a boy around the same age as me, pale as snow, sharp jawline with handsome features looking at me in annoyance. "Augh, can you not see where you are going or what, I'm already late on meaning my friends at cafe Blanche." He exclaimed. This broke me out of my trance and I stared at him in bewilderment, how can someone with angel like features be so cocky and arrogant. Finally I decided to stand up, brushing of the dust off my clothes, I looked at him and spoke "I am sorry but you don't have to be so mean...". He looked at me with anger growing on his face, "argh .... Stupid mortal" he muttered. I could not hear what he had said and so I assumed that he had offended me ... again.
"Minnie" I heard someone call, so I turned around to see oppa with a boy who was grinning, he had ears that made him look like a elf, he looked handsome even though and came running towards me with my worried looking oppa. "Are you ok, did you hurt yourself, I was worried sick looking for you, where did you go?" He questioned. I slowly teared up as I thought about how caring he was even though we are not blood related. "I am ok oppa, it's just that I got lost in my thoughts and when I got out of my thoughts, you were gone. I looked for you but I ended up bumping into a jerk". "Who made my sister upset, tell me who it is and I will beat him for you" he shrieked. I chuckled and told him that it was ok. "Ahhh....Minnie I forgot to tell you, this is Chanyeol my friend...the others are waiting for us in the 'cafe Blanche'". /hmmm I have heard of this cafe but where/ I thought.
We soon arrived at cafe Blanche to see 11 people crowding around a table. Oppa then pointed there and said "they are my friends, I will introduce you to them". We marched towards them before I made contact with the most beautiful angel ever. He had slightly tanned skin, good jawline, quite tall and adorable features. I froze as our eye contact never broke before I looked away blushing. Just as I looked away, I made eye contact with the devil himself or other wise known as the handsome jerk. I froze ... Again... to see that he had surprise written all over his face, I am pretty sure I had the same expression on my face. As we both got back from the trance, we both shouted simultaneously "YOU!"...

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