Chapter 1 WIP

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Sorry this is only the sip version of chapter 1, I know I have been gone for almost a whole month so I just wanted to get something out for you!

I have been busy with studying for future tests and my cat might be pregnant we're not really sure but my parents want to get rid of her so that's another reason why I haven't been posting much here so I hope you enjoy this WIP!

Enjoy!

















Gray clouds filled the screen as a voice spoke up

"Once upon a time there was a glowing city protected by golden gates.. know as heaven." The clouds parted to show a white and gold city that was shining brightly as golden gates appeared blocking the city

Then a bright shining ball of light appeared "it was ruled by beings of pure light.." white figures flew out of the ball of light "angels that worshiped good and shielded all from evil..." three balls covered in eyes with giant wing appeared as a white figure with the eyes closed and a black figure with red eyes appeared

The voice continued "Lucifer was one of these angels.." a white figure was seen flying up and it took shape of a male with three pairs of wings with a top hat on "he was a dreamer.." Lucifer was see. Lifting his hand up as gold particles left it

"with fantastical ideas for all of creation..!" Lucifer was seen flying up and spreading his arms wide as confetti bloomed around him "but he was seen as a trouble maker by the elders of heaven.."

Lucifer was seen flying around as speaking of color sparkled around him "for they felt his way of thinking was dangerous to the order their world.." Lucifer was seen flying down as tall figures loomed over him making his figure slouch slightly

Lucifer was shown watching the elders with a sad look in his face "so he watched as the angels began to expand the universe in their way.. " he watched as four figure all hovered a hand over a small circle with a sad look

"From the dust of earth they created.." a hand was shown grabbing gold dust as the scream went while before it showed a male figure and a female figure "..Adam and Lilith.. equals as the first of many kind but despite this..! Adam demanded control.."

the male figure was shown with his hands on his hip before he started pointing at different places as Lilith backed away, their figure looked like they were arguing as Lilith held her hand up and looked away "and Lilith refused to submit to his will..!" she was shown walking away from Adam's figure

"She fled the garden.." Lilith's figure was shown sitting in the ground with her hands on her face "drawn in by her fierce independence Lucifer found her and to two rebellious dreamers fell deeply in love..!" Lucifer was shown lowering himself to the ground in front of Lilith as he held his hands out and Lilith took them with a smile

"Together they wished to share the magic of free will with humanity..!" Another figure of a girl was shown sitting in front of an Apple tree as Lucifer and Lilith appeared "offering the fruit of knowledge to Adam's new bride eve who gladly accepted..!" Lucifer was shown floating in front of eve while handing her an apple which she took with a smile

Eve was shown holding the Apple to her chest with a smile of her face "but this gift came with a curse.. for with this single act of disobedience evil finally found its way into earth..." as the scream zoomed in of the bright red apple it showed a black crack that slowly approached planet earth slowly being covered by the black tentacles.

"With it a new realm of darkness and sin.." as the black tentacles covered the screen while eyes slowly appeared and covered the whole screen "and the order heaven had worked to maintain was shattered..." the screen moved up showing four white figures floating next to planet earth as it glowed a while color all four angels flinched back as a crack of red appeared in the middle of earth

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