I-DLE: Revenge 2/2 (fixed)

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Need to know:

1. I've added Miyeon and Danielle in this part. Miyeon will be helping Minnie, Danielle is the owner of the cafe, the cafe that's going to be where Shuhua's murder start.

2. I'll be fix the dialogues.

3. There will be a new character.

Also, Danielle doesn't know anyone, except Miyeon.
Now you can read.

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14th August, Danielle's Cafe

Danielle is doing an order, then she looks to see two girls. She askes, "Hello! Welcome to Danielle's Cafe, what do you want to order?"

Soyeon askes Shuhua, then looks at the menu, then speaks, "Hello, we would like an iced latte and an iced americano."

Danielle writes their order on a piece of paper, then askes again, "What will be the names for the order?"

Shuhua looks at Soyeon, and looks at Danielle, then she starts to speak, "Iced latte is for Shuhua, iced americano for Soyeon. It's alright if you call one of us."

Danielle smiles at both Shuhua and Soyeon saying, "Alright, thank you for coming to Danielle's cafe! I hope you enjoy the latte and americano."

Danielle then walks away, and Soyeon looks around, seeing a guy in a fully black suit staring at them. Soyeon then signals Shuhua that they are here. Thankfully, Shuhua knew what she meant.

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Yontorarak's Van.

Minnie is driving the van, asking Miyeon if she wanted some food since Minnie packed some, "Yeon, do you want some food? I packed your favourite." "Really? Thanks, Min!" The brunette grabs the container and eats the food, she also fed Minnie while she was driving.

Yuqi then shouts "Hey! Not fair that your girlfriend is with you!" Haerin then slaps Yuqi in the head, saying "Your girlfriend is literally looking over Shuhua theboss baby!" Minji looks shocked saying "Wait, Shuhua is a boss baby?" "Well yeah! That's her title!" Sunghoon replies.

Finally, they are at their destination, waiting for Shuhua and Soyeon.

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Danielle's Cafe & Alley ( 2 In 1 Place)

Danielle shouts "Soyeon!" and the shorter one comes to get the latte and americano, both Shuhua and Soyeon walks out of the cafe, so did the guy in black. Soyeon whispers "The plan is going well, let's head to the alley now." Shuhua nods, and they head to the alley.

As expected, two men came and gave the middle one a blade, Shuhua then shouts "GO!", Yuqi and Minnie runs to the men in black to stab them in the neck, Ryujin then tackles the one in the middle, locking the guy's hands with handcuffs.

Minji signals Yeji and Ryujin to make the man sit in the chair, which they did and Minji starts to speak "Are you working with Shin Ae?" which the guy replied "I won't tell you anything." Haerin then grabs a pocket knife and stabs the guy's left hand. The guy screamed "Yes, yes! Shin Ae told me to do this! I know where they are at!"

Miyeon speaks "I'm getting some old friends to raid the base. Haerin, go to that cafe and ask if there's a Danielle Marsh and if there is, get her. She's a medic and I know her." "Okay, Myeon." Which Haerin replied.

Haerin runs to the cafe, with a bit of blood on her face, to see an australian girl. She goes to the counter and asks "Is there a Danielle Marsh?" "Yes, that's me, why?" Danielle replied. "I suppose you know Cho Miyeon, right?" "Yes, she's my friend, is she in danger?" Danielle asks Haerin, which she replied "Not exactly, It's for our friend. By the way, make sure to bring a medkit. Also, it's Kang Haerin." "Okay, Haerin."

Haerin and Danielle heads to the alley, to see a man handcuffed to a chair, Ryujin and Yeji holding him, Miyeon with Minnie, Minji, Yuqi, Sunghoon and Soyeon with Shuhua at the end of the alley.

"Oh my god! Miyeon, what happened!?" "My friend was in a planned murder, thanks to Soyeon, she was saved." Minji asks Haerin and Miyeon "Who's that?" Minnie knew who she was, because Miyeon told her about Danielle. "That's Danielle, Kim." "Alright, Yontorarak."

"Tell us everything you know." Ryujin tells the man, "I have more recordings. Sunghoon, come here." "What? Who are you?" Sunghoon asks the man. "Im Park Jongseong, but call me Jay." "Alright.. Give us the recording, Jay." "Uncuff me first.." Shuhua speaks "Uncuff him, Ryeji." "Ryeji? What kind of name is that?" Ryujin asks. Yeji answers Ryujin with "It's a duo name with our names mixed, like.. Daerin!"

Both Haerin and Danielle gets confused and asks "Daerin, like us? But we just met!" Miyeon says "Let's just head back to Min's base." Which all of them replied with "Okay Detective Miyeon!"

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Zero's Note

quick note guys
this was in my drafts because i spent a fucking day on it, you heard me right. A FUCKING DAy
also i have discord and i need friends

feel free to send yo discord usernames in the comments and ill add you guys ( my discord is xdzer0five3 )

also it will be in dialogues (like those incorrect books) because i take too much time thinking and im sometimes lazy as fuck

you guys can read now
bye

- Zero :)

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Yontorarak's Base

Minnie: Jay, give Yuqi the recordings, she can check it.

Jay: She looks like a chinese kid that learnt everything at the age of 3 because of her dad so i trust her

Yuqi: How dare you say that?

Shuhua: Thats basically her past lol

Miyeon: No joking around! Lets listen to the recording!

Yuqi: Yeah yeah..

After listening to the recording, Miyeon calls some old friends (TXT) and they raid Shin Ae's base.

Soyeon: Let's go now!

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Timeskip, Court Room. (i dont exactly know how court works)

Zero: lol hey guys

All: ZERO???

Zero: hey :) im the judge

Yuqi: Zero make this the fastest court ever

Zero: ok.

Zero: Seo Shin Ae, GUILTY! Punishment, Life In Prison!

All: YYEEAHH

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Yontorarak's Van

Zero: guys wanna go to a restaurant to celebrate? lets call the rest here too.

Minnie: Sounds good, Zero.

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Zero's Note 2

hey guys
you see, i added myself because i dont know who i should make them to be judge

zero fact: i can sing super lady (not exactly)

see you guys at next chapter :)

- Zero :)

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