my first story so plssssss suggest how I can improve
I'm done yapping, now let's let the story begin
You are walking down the hallway when you spot Ethan at the corner of your eye. You have always had a habit of making eye contact in the hallways but it was never serious. Ethan and you are similar. You have the same interests, hobbies, and even friends. But you have never talked to him before. He is smart, funny, muscular, and hella hot. Sometimes you can't help but admire him. Whenever you hang out with mutual friends, you always feel like an outsider.
So when you make eye contact with him, you don't think anything of it. Until you find him looking at you during classes. This is very unusual. You can't help but turn a little red at his beaming eyes staring into your soul. Just as you are about to look at him, your friend calls over.
"Hey Y/N!" It was Daniel. You smile and say hi back. "Hey Daniel what's up?" "Nothing much Y/N. I just wanted to comment on how beautiful you look today." Daniel remarks. His comment catches me off guard but I don't know why. He says stuff like this all the time. Why am I shocked now? "Thank you Daniel. You look handsome yourself." I forcefully smile feeling very uncomfortable. The next thing I know he pulls a chair up and places himself down on it. "You know I've always thought you were so pretty. And that shirt on you? Delicious." Daniel says flirtatious. "I'm not interested Daniel, Thanks." He doesn't stop. He continues with these comments and they keep on getting worse and worse. One saying, "I could really see us in bed." Another saying, "Come on baby, I know you want to ride me." My face widens. I get up and try to walk away, yet he pulls me by my arm. I tell him to let go. He doesn't listen.
Just then, Ethan shoves him. Daniel shoves him back and it eventually turns into a fight. "This is what you get for hurting Y/N you piece of shit. You fucking back off of her." And with that, Ethan punches him in the face one more time until he's knocked out cold. I stare at his sexy bloody figure. Blood all over him. He wipes of some of the blood left on his face. "You are gonna get in serious trouble for this..." A random girl says.
