Know that I am a un innocent child who doesn't really care for much other then friends and bl so honestly if you want to be brutal do it I really don't care go ahead and be mean to me all you want and give tips bc I am most likely to not really care since I don't really know why I'm writing this it's probably bc im board, Other then that just enjoy the story as I am an unexpirenced child who's in the 6th grade struggling to find a reason to actually live since I'm failing my coping Mechanism is bl and cutting and I'm trans so life sucks so go ahead and hate and give tips so I now what I'm actually doing wrong with this story and thank you for reading this if you actually any way give tips and then I'll see how I can improve the story to anyone's liking and hopefully everyone else's!