Chapter 5- Tomlinson
The motel room was as ugly on the inside as it had been from the outside: wood paneling, light fixtures attached to the ceiling with chains, shag carpet, television bolted to the stand. It seemed to have been decorated around 1975 and never updated, and it reminded Tomlinson of the places his dad made them stay in when they took their family vacations through the Southwest, when Tomlinson was a kid.
They’d stayed overnight in places just off the highway, and as long as they were relatively clean, his dad had deemed them fine. His mom less so, but what could she do? It wasn’t as if there had been a Four Seasons across the street, and even if there had been, there was no way they could ever have afforded it.
Tomlinson went through the same routine his dad had when entering a motel room: He pulled back the comforter to make sure the sheets were fresh, he checked the shower curtain for mold, he looked for hairs in the sink. Despite the expected rust stains, a leaky faucet, and cigarette burns, the place was cleaner than he’s imagined it might be. Inexpensive, too.
Tomlinson had paid cash for a week in advanced, no questions asked, no extra charge for the dog. All in all, a bargain. Good thing. Tomlinson had no credit cards, no debit cards, no ATM cards, no official mailing address, no cell phone. He carried pretty much everything he owned. He did have a bank account, one that would wire him money as needed. It was registered under a corporate name, not his own. He wasn’t right. He wasn’t even middle class. The corporation did no business. He just liked his privacy.
He led Zeus to the tub and washed him, using the shampoo in his backpack. Afterward, he showered and dressed in the last of his clean clothes. Sitting on the bed, he thumbed through the phone book, searching for something in particular, without luck. He made a note to do laundry when he had time, then decided to get a bite to eat at the small restaurant he’d seen just down the street.
When he got there, they wouldn’t let Zeus inside, which wasn’t surprising. Zeus lay down outside the front door and went to sleep. Tomlinson had a cheeseburger and friend, washed it down with a chocolate milk shake, then ordered a cheeseburger to go for Zeus. Back outside, he watched as Zeus gobbled it down in less than twenty seconds and then looked up at Tomlinson again.
“Glad you really savored that. Come on.”
Tomlinson bought a map of the town at a convenience store and sat on a bench near the town square—one of those old-fashioned parks bordered on all four sides by business-lined streets. Featuring large shady trees, a play area for the kids, and lots of flowers, it didn’t seem crowded: A few mothers were clustered together, while children zipped down the slide or glided back and forth on the swings.
He examined the faces of the woman, making sure she wasn’t among them, then turned away and opened the map before they grow nervous when they saw single men lingering in the area, doing nothing purposeful. He didn’t blame them. Too many perverts out there.
Studying the map, he oriented himself and tried to figure out his next move. He had no illusions that it was going to be easy. He didn’t know much, after all. All he had was a photograph—no name or address. No employment history. No phone number. No date. Nothing but a face in the crowd,
But there were some clues. He’d studied the detail of the photo, as he had so many times before, and started with what he knew. The photograph had ben taken in Hampton. The woman appeared to be in her early twenties when the photo was taken. She was attractive. She either owned a German shepherd or knew someone who did.
Her first name started with the letter A. Ava, Addison, Abigail, Anna, Adele, Alana, Alexia, Alyssa… they seemed the most likely, though in the South, he supposed there could be names like Altricia or Anessa, too. She went to the fair with someone who was later posted to Iraq. She had given this person the photograph, and Tomlinson had found the photograph in February 2003, which meant it had to have been taken before then. The woman, then, was most likely now in her late twenties. There was a series of three evergreen tress in the distance. These things he knew. Facts.
Then, there were assumptions, beginning with Hampton. Hampton was a relatively common name. A quick Internet search, turned up a lot of them. Countries and towns: South Carolina, Virginia, New Hampshire, Iowa, Nebraska. Georgia. Others, too. Lots of others. And, of course, a Hampton in Hampton County, North Carolina.
Though there’d been no obvious landmarks in the background—no picture of Monticello indicating Virginia, for instance, no WELCOME TO IOWA! sign in the distance—there had been information. Not about the woman, but gleaned from the young men in the background, standing in line for tickets. Two of them had been wearing shirts with logos.
One—an image of Homer Simpson—didn’t help. The other, with the word DAVIDSON written across the front, meant nothing at first, even when Tomlinson thought about it. He’d originally assumed the shirt was an abbreviated reference to Harley-Davidson, the motorcycle. Another Google search cleared that up. Davidson, he’d learned, was also the name of a reputable college located near Charlotte, North Carolina. Selective, challenging, with an emphasis on liberal arts. A review of their bookstore catalog showed a sample of the same shirt
The shirt, he realized, was no guarantee that the photo had been taken in North Carolina. Maybe someone who’d gone to the college gave the guy the shirt; maybe he has an out-of-state student, maybe he just liked the colors, maybe he was an alum and had moved someplace new. But with nothing else to go on, Tomlinson had made quick phone call to the Hampton Chamber of Commerce before he’d left Colorado and verified that they had a county fair every summer. Another good sign. He had a destination, but it wasn’t yet a fact. He just assumed this was the right place. Still, for a reason he couldn’t explain, but he’d get to those later.
There were other assumptions, too, but he’d get to those later. The first thing he had to do was find the fairgrounds. Hopefully, the county fair had been held in the same location for years; he hoped the person who could point him in the right direction could answer that question as well.
Best place to find someone like that was at one of the businesses around here. Not a souvenir or antiques shop—those were often owned by newcomers to town, people escaping from the North in search of a quieter life in warmer weather. Instead, he thought his best bet would be someplace like a local hardware store. Or a bar. Or a real estate office. He figured he’d know the place when he saw it.
He wanted to see the exact place the photograph had been taken. Not to get a better feel for who the woman was. The fairgrounds wouldn’t help with that at all.
He wanted to know if there were three small evergreen trees clustered together, pointy ones that could grow almost anywhere.
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You learn more about the girl in the photograph next chapter!
I'll post a picture of what she looks like to the side in the next chapter
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