So here is the last part of the story guys. I know you all will think how abruptly ended but it was pre- decided.
Eventhough if you haven't given any response till now. I request you to give some feedback in the comments.
I already warned everyone before starting of the story that it has some triggering points but even then you read and said that what rubbish character I have written.
I have also tried to clarify you all that this is not a copied story but if you all feel the same then I can do nothing now.
My story is a just like another mediocre story. Also I never support any toxic , dominant, submissive characters but for the first time I wanted to try something like this.
When I have unpublished the story and written a note, many of you have commented about your appreciation so I have taken the screenshots to just verify. And from those many people only few people upvoted and commented on yesterday's chapter and the other ones who boasted much , they even didn't upvote the chapter. I am not going to message them but at least, I am happy that I got to know about that double faced people.
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At night, Ahaan came and went to their room. When he entered the room he was shocked, their room was dark and candles were burning at different places. The room was filled with fragrance. He was just seeing everything till then Ishqi came in a one piece dress. He was lost in her. Her face was glowing in that lights of candle. She snapped her fingers and he came back to reality.
A: Ye sab?
I: Sshhh (she put her finger on his lips) sab pata chal jaayega Ahaan.(she winks) pehle aao dinner krlo.
Then she served dinner to both of them and it was Ahaan's fav dish . As he tasted it , he knew it was made by her.
I: Kaisa bana hai?
A: As always, the best food (he winks her)
Soon they completed their dinner with random talks.
A: Well, thanks for all this but ye sab aaj achanak kyu?
I: I want to confess something.
Ahaan was expecting what is going to happen next but then too he remained silent and put his hand over her hand and asked her to continue.
I(she kept her other hand above his hand): Ahaan, muje acche se pata hai ki hamare rishte ki starting kafi strange thi. Your sudden proposal then our marriage but really after marriage I have lived each moment with you. But after Shanaya 's arrival everything just changed which was very heartbreaking for me (tears formed in her eyes) , you were the someone whom I loved the most but you just shattered everything. It was very difficult for me to cope up that situation. So I got only one option and that was to back out from the marriage and I did it. Maine soch liya tha ki tumhari shakal kabhi nhi dekhungi aur khudko weak ab nhi rehne dungi but again we met.I thought that I hated you but it was just that I was upset from you for hurting me. Bahaut try kiya tumse Nafrat krneka lekin kabhi kr hi nhi payi.(holding his hand firmly and looking into his eyes) Main vo sab bhula nhi sakti Ahaan lekin maaf krke main tumhare saath aage badhna chahti hu. Hamare rishte ko ek second chance dena chahti hu. Tumne kaha ki main tumhari taqdeer hu toh main bhi bol rahi hu ki main leech bankar baithungi tumhari life mein jisse tum ab picha nhi chhudwa sakte (he smiles). Aise hi rahogena tum hamesha? Bolo.
He then kissed her knuckles.
A: You know you are the best thing that ever happened to me and more importantly I need you.I love you.
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ZARA SI DIL MEIN DE JAGAH TU [Completed✅]
Fantasy"Chhodiye muje. " He put his one finger on her lips. "Still your lips are so soft...by the way looking beautiful...but I'm upset with one thing, tumhara iss tarah chhodkar jaana is not at all appreciative" She was just silently listening to his talk...