So I was reading this story again and I couldn't bring myself to move on.
If you have reread, you'd notice that I've started editing too but I feel very less contented with a lot of things and aspects of the story.
So if you are just starting this piece of mine as a first time reader.
Please point out the places you feel some type of way about, you don't have to wait to the, please just point it out via comment on the said chapter
If you are re-reading, please remind me of the possible plot holes I'm missing via comment so I can be notified.
Thanks guys.
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The Azillian Kings(1)
RandomThe Azillian Kings had waited for the last 300 years for their mate. So long now yet there seemed absolutely no hope for them or it seemed that way to them until they chose to move on for the sake of their legacy. An idea that seemed reasonable unt...
