horror society of tmkoc (In Hindi)

6. ghost harmed iyyer

Sorry Guys
I am unable to update new chapter due to my health issues.

Expecting good response in this one as I updated after a long time

Few days passed after that incident. Now babita and everyone forgot that incident.
It was night time at iyyer's house. Babita was sleeping peacefully with iyyer. Suddenly iyyer heard some voices. Iyyer tried to ignore it but the voices become louder.
The voices were mix of voices of 2-3 girls. The voice was "utho iyyer ji".
Iyyer woke up suddenly. He looked at babita who was sleeping. He was confused that why babita didn't woke up by voices.

Iyyer woke up and went towards balcony to see who was calling him. He was little scared too. When he went in balcony, the door of balcony got automatically locked. Now he was stucked in balcony. Iyyer understand that something is going to happen now. He started reciting something in his mouth. When he opened his eyes, he saw a terrible scene. He saw the building of gokuldham society was covered with red liquid which was looking like blood .

(Guys imagine everything in your mind. Like bhide was standing in balcony and society was covered with blood)

Iyyer was shocked. The society was normal when he entered the balcony but just in 2-3 sec the whole society was covered with blood. Iyyer understand that covering whole society with red liquid or may I say blood isn't a work of a human. Then he saw a girl standing in the centre of society but bhide can't see her due to darkness , suddenly her face become visible to iyyer and he shouted loudly as he saw burnt face of the girl.the girl was looking at him with black eyes. The whole face of girl was burnt. Suddenly she started laughing loudly and she pointed her hand towards iyyer. Iyyer, who wasn't able to speak now. The girl pulled her hand and iyyer started flying in air .

(I hope you guys are able to imagine after reading my tutti futti english. Sorry for that. You guys can comment if you have any confusion)

The girl looked at iyyer for the last time and blinked her one eye and got disappeared. When the girl got disappeared, iyyer who was flying in air, fell on the ground of society. He screamed loudly. Due to his Scream, whole society Woke up and came in compound. They saw iyyer laying on floor. They hurriedly rushed towards him. When they picked him. They notices blood oozing from his mouth, elbow and leg.

Babita: oh god iyyer, kya hua tumhe

She started crying after seeing his condition.

Taarak: iyyer  kya huya.

Bhide : jaldi se ambulance ko bulao

Sodhi: are ambulance ko time lgega ane mai. Chlo meri jeep mai hospital chalte hai.

Iyyer, babita, daya, taarak, jethalal settled in jeep of sodhi . Sodhi started driving.

In jeep,
Iyyer eyes were little open. He was trying to speak something but he was unable to speak.

Babita : tell us iyyer, yeh haal kisne kiya tumhara

Iyyer : voh - voh ladki

Daya: konsi ladki iyyer bhai

Iyyer : v-voh j-jale h-huye muh vali l-la-ladki ah

And he fainted.....

Babita: iyyerrrrrrr

Taarak: babita ji , khoon kafi jyaada beh geya hai. Lekin app Tenison mat lijiye

They reached hospital. taarak filled the necessary form on the reception. Dr. Verma was treating bhide. Dr. Hathi appointed him for iyyer urgently

It was 2:00 a.m
Babita,daya, Sodhi, jethalal and mehta were waiting for doctor to come outside.
Finally the doctor came outside. He was looking tensed.

Babita: doctor kese hai yeh? Inhe hosh agya

Dr. Verma: I am sorry mrs.iyyer  but

Babita was looking at him wide eyes. She didn't expect him to say sorry.

Babida: what sorry? Kya hua inhe

Dr. Verma: he is in coma.......

And everyone standing there was shocked. They can't believe doctor's words.

Taarak: doctor what are you saying?

Dr. verma: We are sorry but this is true

Sodhi: doctor saab voh coma se bahar kab ayega

Dr. Verma: we don't know that. Now everything is in god's hand.

Babita was broken. She fell on floor and started crying loudly.

Daya picked her and made her sit on nearby chair. She asked jethalal to bring water for her. She was consoling him but madhvi was crying continuously. Everything just happened so quickly.
This night changes everything.

Doctor: app sab logo ko abhi ghar chale jana chaihiye

Babita : noo I will not leave iyyer in this situation alone . Jab tak iyyer coma mai hai tab takk mai iske sath rahugi.

Taarak: babita ji , coma mai gye insaan ka kuch nahi pata ki voh kabb hosh mai ayei. Aur ham sab ab rojj yaha toh nahi reh skte na . Ham Subha hote fir yaha ayege iyyer  ko dekhne. Ab chliye.

Daya held babita and helped her to walk as babita had no energy left to walk by herself. She was showing no expressions. She was walking like a dead person or may I say lash. Tears wete continuosly Flowing form her eyes. Taarak called anjali and informed her about iyyer's condition. Anjali informed everyone about it. Whole gokuldham members were waiting for them in compound. ..

Here's update guys

I wanna ask question to y'all.
Should I end this premika's part here and start new horror concept in gokuldham or should I continue this only?

Next update will be late due to my health issues

Thank you ❤️