In the metropolis of Zanmania, at its docks, lies a warehouse where a couple of toons are engaging in a drug deal. Outside on an adjacent rooftop, stands an orange furred fox toon, garbed head to paw in red, a 40's fedora adorned her head while a trench coat rested openly and concealing her feminine frame. Her name is Fiona Vixen, detective of the Zanmania police force. She is following a lead on a drug deal for Thinner, a very illicit and highly dangerous liquid substance for any toon to ingest. Her emerald green eyes staring at the warehouse, content on delivering the righteousness of the law to these evildoers, she is suddenly then grabbed by two burly goons, she struggles to free herself.
Goon#1: (Excited) "the boss is gonna love this one!"
Then she is brought to their boss, a scrawny male rat toon who is handing thinner over to local gangs, he notices the two goons bringing her over and smirks.
Rat: (Smug) "Ah, thought you'd shut us down yet again, Velvety?"
Fiona: (Aggressive) "As soon as I free myself, I'm kicking your sorry filthy butt all the way to Alcatraz!"
Rat: (Cockily) "Yeah yeah, unfortunately for you, you won't see that happen as I'm gonna put you through these rollers and flatten you into a good laminated pinup cop, tie her up boys! Then set her on the belt"
Fiona then felt her pistol getting unholstered and taken, then she was tied up tightly to ensure her arms and legs can't move. She was placed on the conveyer belt as the rat stood by the switch smugly grinning.
Rat: (Smugly) "Goodbye Velvety!"
Then the belt started moving, each passing moment Fiona was inching closer and closer to the hungry maws of the rollers that threaten to smush her paws first. So she had to act fast, she looked around and fortunately for once she found a saving grace, a knife, she then tried to reach for it with a paw and failed as she's trying not to get caught again. She struggled and struggled until she finally got it and started slicing at the rope, once she was free she rolled off the belt just before her heels got caught in the rollers, she saw her pistol was just laying on the table in the open. she grabbed it and then there was gunfire so she ducked behind some crates, she looked out and saw a huge anvil hanging over some goons.
*BANG!* *ZOOM!* *SQUELCH!*
She shot the chain and the anvil fell onto them, squashing them into pancake shaped goons. One charged at her and she dodged out of the way as the goon toon tripped on the barrels and falls right onto the conveyor belt and into the rollers, where a lot of squishing and stretching was heard, the goon came out the other end flattened and encased in a clear hard resin sheet. After taking care of the rest of the goons she wondered where that rat went.
*RIP!*
She looked down and saw a part of her coat's sleeve has a tear in it from the rat trying to stab her from behind only to terribly miss and instead slice through her sleeves. Annoyed, she turned around and drove the toe of her red heel into his groin, causing him to make a very high pitched yelp and fell to the floor unconscious as his nuts were kicked so hard, they went straight to his brain and knocked him out, she pulled a radio out of her right pocket and then radioed the chief of police in Zanmania.
Fiona: "All clear at the docks chief, you can send in the k-9's to append them over?"
Chief: "that is a 10-4, Units are enroute, over?"
Fiona: "Roger that also chief be sure to also send some spatulas, over and out!"
She decided to look around while she waited, she eventually found her way into the office and looked some more, her keen eye was observing every space, every nook and cranny for any illicit substances other then the thinner that was exchanged, she looked in one of the drawers of the desk and found a baggie containing cocaine, she put on her red gloves and grabbed the baggie, and walked back to find K-9's making arrests and searching the premises for evidence, she hands the baggie to one who proceeded to put it in an evidence briefcase. Later at the Zanmanian Police Station, Fiona was in her office filing a report on the case, her paws typing away on her keyboard as her fedora and trench coat were off, visible bags under her eyes are apparent at her tiredness.
[Case Number: 062288, Date: 03/04/1997]
[At approximately 19:28 in the late hours of the evening, 27 year old rat named Michael Josh, was arrested at Roger's dock on Rabbit Avenue for possession of narcotics, and participating in the exchange of the illicit substance known as Thinner. Michael's denied the charges and frequently requested to see a lawyer, further more, tests revealed that Michael was intoxicated from narcotics, further questioning is necessary to find the maker of thinner and stop the future distribution of Thinner.]
[Reporting Officer: Detective Fiona Fox, 03/05/1997]
[Supervisor Approval: Chief Ace Smith, Date: 03/05/1997]
That's all for now folks, and what do you guys think so far?
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