Hi everyone,
I hope you're doing well! Thank you so much for giving my story a chance and for providing such amazing feedback—it's been incredibly helpful, and I really appreciate the time you've taken to read and comment.
To improve the upcoming chapters, I'd love to know if you feel the story is dragging or too descriptive, and if you think shorter chapters (800-1000 words) would work better. Also, if there are parts you really liked, I'd love to hear about those too! Thanks again for your invaluable feedback, and have a great weekend!
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Serenity: A Journey Within
FanfictionIn a world full of the complex interplay of love and choices, Mubashira begins a deep journey to understand herself better. Amid the ups and downs of her destiny, she wishes for a fresh start and tranquility on a heartfelt adventure where hidden tru...
