DHARTI LOK
Vivaan was shock d
He said loudly -"Maa! Mummy!Mom!aap teeno saath mein ?!"
Yess in kitchen ,Bhawna ,Devki and Karuna were together preparing sweets for Vivaan aur Puja ki tayari bhi !!!
"Ye kaise ho sakta hai ?!" Asked Vivaan as he was shocked seeing three women together who frequently had catfights for him !!!!
"Arey Vivaan Mera baccha ,hayee nazar na lage,bada pyaara lag raha hai tu " said KJ and hugged him
"Ekdm hero lag rahe ho Vivaan " said devki
"Haan Salman bhai pasandida hai naa tumhare ,ussey bhi handsome!" Said Bhawna
"Thankyou so much (hug broke)lekin mujhe ye samajh nahin aa raha ki aap teenon saath mein kaise ?!?" Asked Vivaan
"Beta tumhare kehne ka matlab hai hum teeno humesha dur rehte hain?!"asked Bhawna
"Dur nahin , jhagadte rehte ho naa !" Said Vivaan
"Bolo nahin suno,wo jhagda nahi hasi majak hota hai hum doston ka " said Karuna
"Wahi toh " said Devki
"Ohh accha ?! Toh wo uss din ek dusre ke chappal todna ,Bags ganda karna hasi majak tha ?!Waah aisa hasi majak toh maine ,sutli aur Gopu ne bhi nahi kiya " Vivaan said being fake shocked
"Chappal todna ?! Ye kab hua ? Mujhe bhi batao bhai !" Said dev entering
"Arey raat gayi baat gayi ,abhi Puja pe dhyaan do naa " said Bhawna
"Kahan hai Puja ?!dikhegi tab naa dhyaan denge " said Devaan and laughed
The three mothers saw each other
With the expression of "Ye nahin sudhrenge"
"Waise bhaiya , thankyouuuuh so muchhh for the room makeover ,bahot pyaara gift de rahe ho aap ,itna enough hai bro "
Thanked Vivaan
Dev gave him a side hug-"Glad ki tujhe accha laga ,tere liye bhale enough hoga lekin mere liye itna enough nahin hai naa chote ,Abhi bahot saare surprises baaki hain ,abhi toh 4 hi huye hain usmei bhi pehla tune Tod diya "
[Humare baalveer ko usi gift ki chinta hai 🥱]
Viv confused -"Chaar ?! Kaise ?! Mummy bhi room makeover wale surprise ko teesra keh rahi thi jbki wo dusra hona chahiye naa"
Dev -"Umm chal utna guess hi kar le lekin haan Chautha yahi toh hai ,inn teeno ka milan !"and laughed
Viv -"Ohh acchaa so ye maahan gift
Bhi aapka tha !!! Thanks bro meri teenon माताओं ko saath laane ke liye" and laughed
"Dev ek toh tu itni late aa raha hai aur abh time waste kar raha hai ,wo toh Ray beta aa gaya tha tab warna hum teeno akele kitna kuch karte ,kam se kam abh toh jaldi karo bahot time ho raha hai " said Karuna
Devaan and Baalpari were shocked
"Rayy ?!! Ray yahin hai ?! " Asked dev
"Haa beta upar hi toh gaya tha pandit ji ke saath unhone hi kaha tha kisi ko bhejne,tumlog the nahin toh usey hi bhej diya " said Karuna
"Par mummy,mujhe toh bas Pand...!" Vivaan stopped ,realised ,left his dialogue incomplete and was leaving from there to check....Ray ofcourse because he had a feeling that something is wrong but.....KJ hold his hand
"Mummy please jaane do ,2 minute mei aa jaunga " Vivaan requested as it was urgent for them to leave ; Dev understood his hurry and tried to leave too but
"Kahin nahi jaana hai ,agar dono mei se koi kahin gaya naa toh soch lena..."
"Maa sochne ka time hi nahin hai , please jaane do " said Vivaan
"Arey itni hadbadi kyun ho rahi hai tujhe? Puja hone de phir jaana jahan jana ho "
Devaan were so much in tension
Through teleportation
"Ab kya karey bhaiya ,? Agar Ray ne kuch kar diya hoga toh ?"
"Tum ruko Vivaan Main Maa ko kehta hun ki wo Karuna maa ka dhyaan bhatka de "
He told BP everything by sign
BP -"Arey Karuna ji ,main toh bhul gayi thi ,Ray ne kaha tha ki ye dono aa jayein toh upar help karne bhej dun aur phir dev tayar bhi nahin hua hai (to dev) Pata hai dev ,Karuna ji ne apne haathon se sila hai tera kurta "
KJ -"Accha jao dono par tayaar hoke aa jaana jaldi wo bhi Ray ke saath "
"Ji maa ,Thankyouu " they left asap
Karuna ji was somehow confused ki itni jaldi kyun hai dono ko
[Aapko pata nahi aunty aapke dono bete humare superhero hain jinhe dubara saath dekhne ke liye humari aankhe taras rahi hain 😭🤍]
"Bhaiyaa..I am feeling ki something is wrong ...aur ab....ab ye Ray...."
"Vivaan itna tension mat lo aur mere hote huye tumhe pareshaan hone ki jarurat nahin ,chalo Ray Kahan hai dekhte hain "
They ran upstairs; searched each room
Then stopped near a room
"Mila kya tumhe ?"
"Nahin bhaiya kahin nahin ,ab kuch samajh nahin aa raha mujhe "
"Main kuch help karun kya ?" Ray entered (lo help puchkar hi help kar diya bro ne 😂)
"Jinn logon ko khud help ki jarurat hai wo humari help karenge ?!" Said Vivaan taking a calm breath
Ray glared him with impatience
"Ohh you misunderstood,Main veerlok ka member nahin , so mujhe help ki jarurat nahin "
"Waise kisi aur ke ghar mei aise ghumna sahi nahi hai " said dev
"Toh tum kyun aise behave kar rahe ho jaise ye tumhara Ghar ho ? You are just a PG right?" Said Ray
"Haan main pay karta hun toh ghum sakta hun ,tum Aisa karoge toh terrorist lagoge " replied dev
(BV bgm )
[Chalo Jo bhi attitude wala bgm hai naa BVs ka wo imagine krke dialogues padhna okieee ?"]
"Arey Mera ghar visiting spot thodi naa hai,aur Ray tumhe mere ghar aake punya kamane ki jarurat nahin ,Kyunki burai ke members sirf badduaein kama sakte hain punya nahin " said Vivaan
(arey bgm play karo)
Ray in anger -"Atleast we earn something! Acchai ki tarah beg nahi karte "
"Tumne pehchana hi nahi acchai ko ,bhagwan se prathna karna is not begging " replied dev
(Baar baar bolun kya play karne ?)
"But shaitaan se karna toh hai naa ,Senior baalveer ?!" Said Ray
Devaan shocked
Ray smiles -"I know who you are , toh ye jhute identity ki jarurat nahin and haan don't worry maine kuch bigada nahi sirf help hi kiya hai " and left
[In mind - "Help hi kiya hai lekin apna not yours dear baalveers"] and thinking so he smirks
Devaan had thoda relief but jyada tension kyunki ofcourse aisa koi burai nahi karegi ki mauka Milne pe bhi hamla na kare
Viv -"Bhaiya be careful haan "
Dev -"Ray ne kaha ke wo kuch nahi karega ,odd nahi laga tumhe?"
Viv -"Haan bhaiya , issiliye toh kaha thoda nahin pura careful rehna hoga humey ,aur phir kayi dino se burai ka koi attack bhi nahi hua hai naa ,maybe unn logon ne kuch bada plan Kiya hoga "
Dev -"Haan Vivaan,dhyaan dena hoga humey inn sab pe ,but tum apna birthday enjoy Krna Mt bhul jana ,mere wajah se already tumne bahot kuch sambhala hai in this age aur abh main nahi chahta ki bade ke hone ke baad bhi chota khush naa reh paye "
Viv -" Bhaiya aap bhi naa ,remember ki ,Bas bade ke hone se hi chota khush rehta hai and I really don't need anything except aap sabki smiles " and hugs him
Dev also smiles and hugs him back
Ended------
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