The first scene shows the clouds and we see a coop. It shows a chicken packing up for her trip to Paris to Athens. She looked at her bag and said "Alright, I have everything but I'm missing something." "Me!" A chick ran to his mother and jumped in her bag. "Kickin, you know I can't take you." Kickin dreams of going to see the world, but he's too young that's what she said. "And your sisters are babysitting you, so behave!" He sighed, as his mom took him out the bag. His sisters entered the house. "Mom! We're here!" Mother Hen put down the chick and gave him a little smile. She ran up to her car and waved to her young son and her older daughters. Kickin was upset. Cut to the ice cream parlor, Kickin and Hoppy are playing 80s days around the world, Hoppy loses to a soccer game earlier so she is in the mood to win. As the critters cheer for their friends. The girls cheered for Hoppy while the boys cheered for Kickin. Dogday asks Bubba. "When did Kickin and Hoppy become interested in video games?" "Since he couldn't join his mom at her's trip and she lost a soccer game." He says in a deadpan tone. We see two sibling peacocks talking about their diamond smuggling. "How about Chase? He does a good job." "Nah, they know what his face looks like, we need someone new!" The peacock looks down at the critters with disgust, "Little brats!" The peacock said. Dogday looks at Bubba with worry. "Hoppy is winning!" "I heard that, Dogday!" Kickin said, Bubba tries to tell Kickin about the shortcut but Dogday says "it's too dangerous!" "It's my only chance!" Kickin says as he takes the short cuts but the crocodile ate his balloon, he loses to Hoppy, as the girls cheered for Hoppy as they ran up and hugged her, Kickin gets upset, this was a hit to his ego. "No fair!" Kickin yelled "If I had the money, I would win the race" Hoppy turns around to him and said "Really? Cause you won't! And we will never know who would win!" As Kickin and Hoppy had an argument about who would win an around world race. Dogday tried to break it up while Catnap was sleeping in the background.
The peacock heard their argument and smiled at her brother, "Hear that? looks like we found somebody!" Her brother looks at her "Look they're only children I don't think-" She grabs his collar of his shirt "That's the part they're children, Nobody expects little children to do our dirty work and we won't let this chance go like LAST TIME!" Charles sighs as he speaks "Alright, alright, you won't let that go, won't you?!?" As Hoppy and Kickin are about to fight, Two rich looking peacocks with French accents came out and introduced themselves as Charles and Allison, and Allison's pet cat pickles, they heard Kickin and Hoppy's argument, and wonder who would win a race around the world under 80 days, the critters are confused and bubba is shocked cause who in their right mind would let these two function hot air balloons, As Allison says she'll bet 10 Thousand dollars on Kickin and Charles bet 100 Thousand dollars on hoppy. The bunny and chick were buttered up, enough that they agree without thinking, as the critters are shocked and catnap is still sleeping. As the critters were standing with shock, Bubba asked the peacocks with a nervous smile. "Are you sure letting those two handle hot air balloons alone is a good idea?" Allison looks down at him "You're right, and that's why you'll all join them in their Journey!" The critters looked even more shocked at first until Picky said "That means that I could eat exotic foods from different places!" As the critters thought about it, mostly all of them were excited but bubba felt those peacocks are suspicious because really? Look at Kickin and Hoppy, Who would bet on them? Allison says "Get ready my little sweeties because tomorrow Your little lives are going to be changed forever!" As the critters are about to leave, dogday says " Wait! We forgot about Catnap!" As he runs back for his friend, he accidentally trips the waitress that was holding milkshakes and she drops them on poor Catnap, as he screeches.
Thescene cut to night as kickin tells his sisters about this summer camp and mom allowed him to go, the older didn't believe him and middle one was hesitant and young out of the three was suspicious of him, he said it's going to be a month and he'll come back home before mom. Cuts to hoppy telling to her folks, that she's going to a camp with the girls, cuts to all the critters tricking their parents or parent about going to a "camp" for a month, bubba and dogday was the most hesitate to lie, cause dogday doesn't like lying to the ones he love so lying to his parents is torturing his soul, as for bubba, he doesn't want to lie or go with the boys but they'll be lost without him, so he lied to his mother. The next scene starts in the morning with kickin and his sisters at breakfast. As he finished his meal, he looked at the clock, it's 7:00 am! He needs to go now, as he got his backpack and about to leave, his older sister asked him if he needs a ride but he denied because he can walk there with his friends, his sister looked at him with suspicion, but let him anyway. As The boys finally went to the mansion, Kickin was complaining about them dragging catnap cause he was late and slept in, dogday said to bubba "Bubs, why do I feel so bad for lying to my parents?" "That's called guilt and regret, dogday."As the critters looked at the expensive looking yard they found the balloons and the girls, Hoppy said "Oh, you made it, I thought you never came and I'll get those 100 Thousand dollars." "In your dreams, Hope, in your dreams!" Kickin says with a grin. Kickin looks at all the packing and said "Wow hops, it's going be a month! Not a year! You girls and overpacking!" Hoppy rages up as her face turns to red "Hey! It's good to be prepared, and half of those are not even mines!"
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✨The smiling critters adventure✨
FanfictionOur critters are on an around world race. The first team wins and gets 100 thousand dollars. Follow the critters on their life changing adventure and let's hope nothing goes wrong. This is a rewrite of the chipmunks adventure and I got inspired by...