Hurting No More

Hey everyone! I am new to watt pad and this is my first book on here. I am only going to give you the first chapter right now, though I have 7 already. The first one is really short so just tell me what you think!!

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Chapter 1: Falling- I tried not to trip but the tears were making it hard for me to see. Everything was blurry. Right. Left. Right. Rock. I stumble and suddenly, I'm falling. Not like I should be, though. It's worse. I am falling through memories and dreams, reliving all of them. Why haven't I hit ground yet? I don't like this-it hurts. How much if this can I take? Not too much more, i hope. I don't want to go through this again. Not again. NO! Once was enough. Once. Was. ENOUGH! My life was/is/always will be horrible and now I'm visiting my former self. My hideous, disgusting, and stupid-so stupid-self that I have yet to evolve from. I hate it. I hate me! It HURTS! Pain. Or maybe that is the knowledge of being hated dripping through my veins that hurts so bad. All i feel is pain, if i can feel anything. Can I feel something, or am I the heartless, soulless monster they accuse me if being? Maybe I am. Finally, FINALLY my memories are starting to fade. Or maybe, that's me. Fading. Disappearing rapidly. A last, quick breath and all is black.

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I know the first chapter is really, really short. The next few

are way longer. What did you think? Thanks