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*i shake my head at devil #2819.. not able to even mumble a word out.. shakily i say:* " NO!.. didn't you know the after-lifers LIE?! they lie more than ANYTHING!! we can't trust them.. " devil #2819: " oh shoot! your right.. he's trying to lead us away from here, not to heaven.. " devil #4739: " RUN INTO THE OPPOSITE PORTAL!! " after-life: " NO! COME BACK HERE AHH!! " *after-lifer charges at us but we quickly pull each-other into the portal* " OH MY GOD!! WHAT WAS THAT?" *devil #4739 says*.. devil # 2819: " I DON'T KNOW!! ITS OKAY.. WE ARE FINE NOW.. " *they both try to catch their breath, breathing heavily before walking up to the gate* devil #2819: " should we.. knock? " *devil #4739 nods at devil #2819.. knowing that if this is the devils gate, they just ruined everything with the after lifers.* both of them: " hellooo? is anyone in there " *the gate opens and they gasp..* devil #2819: " that was quick aha.. " *devil #4739 nods at devil #2819* " yeah.. you're right.. let's go now. " *they walk into the gate confused where they are but they finally find a god* devil #4739: " uh.. father is that you? " god: " yes it is, why did you pass the gate? " devil #2819: " satan forced us to go against you and others, we don't want to be there and we really want to apologize for our action's and everything we have done badly, we are bad people and i understand if you don't want to let us in heaven's gate, after all we were born devil's.. " god: " that is okay my child, i will give you another chance and i forgive you, you can stay here to, if you need. " devil #2819: " really?.. devil #4739, should we stay or continue traveling away. " devil #4739: we.. we.. should- "

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