Part 1

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"Bitch,"

A man walked around his car, inspecting a large scratch along the sides of it.

"I orta' kill the mother fucker who scratched poor Susie q like this, my poor baby"

As the man inspected the car, a sheriff walked up to him.

"Sir, I see that you have had something happen to your car, but first could I take few minutes of your time"

The man looked up and down the officer, inspecting his name plate,
"What I want officer, Hagey, is for you to find the son of bitch who scratch up my Susie q"

"Sir, this will only take a few moment of your time and then I'll do my best to find out who did this to your ummm.. Susie q"

"Fine"

The sheriff showed a photo of a man,
"We're looking for this man, we'd like to ask him some questions, have you seen him around the bar any"

"Hmmm.., I wouldn't say I have, he'd stick out like a sore thumb if I had. Does this man have a name?"

"Unfortunately, we haven't had any luck on getting name. Anyway, why don't we go inside and we'll take a look at those cameras to see who put this scratch on your car"

"Actually, you know what, I think I've got it under control, you office and have a safe, and happy night"

The officer tipped his hat, "You as well, let me know if you see him"

The man replied, "sure thing"

The man stumbled back into the bar, amd took his seat at the end, watching as the officers left. The bartender and him exhanged glares as they left, the bartender asked,

"You know him, I've seen him a time or two in here, quiet, keeps to himself, doesn't cause any rucuss"

The man replied,
"I've seen him a time or two in here also, or at least what I remember those nights, I wasn't about to let them know"

"Wonder what kind of trouble he could be"

"Who knows"

Later in the night....

The man walked to his car in a stagger, looked down at the stracth and commented while opening his car "We'll get whoever did this Susie q"

As he fumbled around at the handle he dropped his keys, as he went to pick the up, a man walked up behind him, wrapped his arm around his neck, then choked him until he passed out. The man shoved him in his car and drove to an abonded warehouse, where he tied him up to a chair. As he awoke his vision was tunneled. All he could hear coming back into consciousness was someone snapping their fingers, and a soft calling of his name "Jerry, Jerry, Jerry..."

When Jerry awoke he realized the man standing in front of him was the guy the police were searching for.

"you're him"

"Ahh yes I see that you saw my photo"

"Listen man I don't want any trouble"

"Really, well don't you wanna know who scratched up your beautiful Susie   q"

"You son of a bitch I should beat your ass for doing that"

"Unfortunately for you, it doesn't seem like that's going to happen" the man said pacing around with a knife in his hand"

Jerry watched as the man paced around, wiping a seemingly new knife with his shirt. The man held the knife up and looked at his relection.

"I have a few questions for you gary, and I might let you live"

"Anything, I'll even forget what you did to my cat if you let me go, no cops or anything. I didn't even tell them I saw you at the bar"

"Ahh yes, of course that was very much appreciated. Helped make getting you a little bot smoother with cops off my back"

"What the hell man" Jerry said loudly, and then saying, "What do you want with me, I'm just some drunk anyway, I don't mess with no body"

"So you think you're harmless do you, what about August the fourth, 1999"

"Listen man it was an accident, I did my time"

"Yet you were going to get behind the wheel tonight"

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 11 ⏰

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