Hello, HK (aka KaytheAce) here!
This fic is half author's note at this point lol
I would like your opinions!
Option one: No ship children. This fic gets retconned.
Palette doesn't exist. Goth doesn't exist. The potential for Error to get memory issues that make him recognize Reaper and Goth for a split second that results in angst out of hope for reconciliation, moral dilemnas, and a comedy/tragedy divorcecore saga doesn't exist. This fic can do without the subplot (aka it's easier for me to keep track of two less characters and this will change the vibe of the story).
Option two: Ship children. All of the above exists.
Dream visits Palette, who has a friendship with Goth. I am bad at writing the children because it's hard to know their personalities. Afterdeath is a crack ship that only slightly affects the remainder of the story for comedic effect. I have to write about Dream gushing about his kid and you have to read Dream gushing about his kid and Ink forgets that Palette exists.
I will be honest, it's better, personally, for me to retcon shipkids out because a. I don't have to nail down their personalities, b. it changes the vibe of the story, c. I might feel obligated to include other kids like Blueprint and Paperjam, and d. there's so many characters and that takes away from the direction.
Onwards!
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Phoenix
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