Hey buddies
I just wanted to come on here and say a quick thing because like.... it needs to be said.
I am not particularly impressed with Bennie's story. It hasn't gone the way that I wanted it to and I definitely rushed the end. I'm thinking about rewriting it from the point of Harper's first POV.
I just think that would be a good place to start because I feel that's where it went a bit downhill.
My writing and the way that I write is something that I pride myself on and I have not done this story justice. It could have been stress or what have you.
I think I can get away with rewriting this one as nothing that happens in this story is detrimental to the other published ones. I have a lot of stuff in the works because I am trying to complete the ROGERSTONE-MONTGUMERY series so I can give the war story that has been teased in three (almost four) other stories, to those who want it.
I just wanted to let the readers of this specific story know that changes are going to be happening... So stay tuned for that.
All changes will be made on this story, so you won't have to worry about finding the new one.
I really want to do Bennie justice because she does have a special place in my heart, and this book is not good enough for her. And it is definitely not her story. I have no idea what happemed while I was writing but it did and I will undo it because it is awful.
Anyways, how are you? Enjoying summer in the NH? Is it nice and wintery in the SH?
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Collie
General FictionBennie, known for her unique eyes and unbelievable charm. Everyone is jealous of her girlfriend. They want to be her. Or do they? This story takes place in the far future and is actually one of my Maladaptive Daydreams. None of the characters are re...
