What needs to be done for a better world

Story update.

11/16/2024:

This part took longer to write than I originally expected. I found myself running in circles trying to find the best way to put everything I had in mind into words. While it was finished some time ago, I still found areas that didn't quite match what I had envisioned, so I spent some extra time reworking them until they felt right.

I decided to split the chapter into two parts because it ended up being a bit too long (~13k words). I find it harder to maintain focus on a chapter when it's that lengthy, and I'm sure some of you might feel the same way. This section is largely focused on the background story for Sam and Ray.

I can't say for sure when the next chapter will be ready, as I haven't started working on it yet, and with my work schedule, it'll be a little while before I can dive in. But I'm looking forward to getting started as soon as I can.

I hope you've enjoyed this chapter if you've already read it, or that you will when you do! Thank you for your continued support.

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07/26/2024:

Hello everyone, to begin with, I would like to thank you for reading until this point. It's my first time actually writing a story (I did write ideas and short passages for a story, but nothing really as detailed as this one is).

The next chapter is almost complete, but there are a few points I'm not entirely satisfied with. I don't want to release a half-finished chapter, as that doesn't sit well with me.

In the meantime, if you have any questions about the story so far, please feel free to ask. Although the story is still in its early stages, your feedback is invaluable. If there's anything you don't understand or think needs reworking, I'd love to hear your thoughts and discuss them here.

This update might appear and disappear between story passages as I work on it, so don't be alarmed.

I can't provide a definite release date for the next chapter, but I hope it will be soon.

See you soon!